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| Richard 2008-10-03 ch 5, anon. | abuseA really well written story. Just remember to not get lazy on the punctuations. Other than that, it was excellent! |
| Rampaging_Hippogriff 2007-10-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseNice ending, cliff hanger. Great story I can't wait to see the next one. Your a really good author and I hope to see more of your stories. Keep up the good work. |
| Rampaging_Hippogriff 2007-10-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseSorry I havn't reviewed yet, been really busy. Anyway, great job chapter 4 was so sad. I'm glad to hear that you are planing a sequel, can't wait. Keep up the great work! |
| Rampaging_Hippogriff 2007-09-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseSorry it took so long to review been busy, anyway great chapter so cute. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens. |
| Rampaging_Hippogriff 2007-09-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseYES an new story, sounds good too, I hope its as good as your last one (I'm sure it will be). Update soon! |