interesting. it is really good. I hope you will update oneday

PLEASE UPDATE! I WANNA READ MORE! You rarely get a good Warren/Will pairing! Please update!

Dude, my friend Kylar (prep, not that I don't love her) is super afraid to go into Hot Topic ever since my friend and I dragged her in there, and she saw a guy that worked there that had a really tall electric blue mohawk and enough piercings to break a metal dectector wink at her, and lick his lips.

OH I'm Happy! Great Chapter!!

Very amusing, I like a lot. :)Can't wait to see more.

OMG I love this story it is so cute i dont know what it is but i love Warren/will stories

This is an amazing story! I love it and the way you portray Will and Warren and thir relationship. Deffinately a turn that I wasn't expecting in chapter 6. Excelent work so far and I hope you will continue. On another note, still a few grammar and spelling typos, no big deal though :) .

I just got into the Sky High fandom, and have since been reading all the Warren/Will slash I can get my hands on. Yours has a really nice premise thus far; I'm enjoying the way that the plot is developing.

A few little nitpicky details, like grammar and spelling, but for the most part really nice.

very nice
You're a bit choppy at some points, as you pointed out early on sometimes you don't put things in so they don't mess with the flow and other times things make me pause before continuing. Usually it's a story point that has to come across but sometimes it isn't. I notice this less and less as the story progresses suggesting that you are already ironing this out chapter by chapter.

I'm enjoying this story very much and look forward to the next chapter.

Aww snuggle time. Everybody loves snuggle time.

WarrenWill cuddles *giggles* So cute:)

Aww, thats so sweet. Warren is an artist.

Not bad, its very cutesy(^_~)

luvin it!!1 continue

You need to have someone look over your writing for accuracy-in some cases you have the wrong word-our/are, there/their, your/you're. Your storyline also doesn't have any kind of conflict-is everything all Utopian or are there problems they have to deal with? They don't even have to struggle to get together, it just comes together in the first few paragraphs of the story, all too neatly.