nice oneshot could you continue it after you are done with the connan stuff seams interesting espeacially since her name is just revan malak backwards

hey why don´t you finish the rest of the game
i still have to finde one very good that raven don´t lose her/his memory

Woah, woah, WOAH. I only just noticed this. I mean, like, WOAH. I had this exact idea in mind for writing a KOTOR story, only I never got around to it. OMG, I can't believe you got there before me! GAH!
Ah well. You're not stopping there, are you? I hope not.

Oh, and I LOVED the name. COOL name. Naver Kalam. Teehee.
Hey, you know what I recently discovered? "Malak" is a female Arabic name meaning either "peace" or "angel", I can't remember which. But really, a FEMALE name...?

Anyways. Great story. It's a shame this is only a one-shot, but now you've really motivated me to get my own idea up and running. Don't worry, I won't use any of your original, fantastic material. But I'll stick in a special mention if I ever get around to doing it...

And I'm still holding Sunday's update against you! *smile*

Cheers!

~ Estora ~

The name. What else can I say. :)

Now this is the start of a long story. I would like it if you continued.

You're back! :D
Great writing as usual, I thought it was rather clever, although Revan wasn't very creative at coming up with a name. I hope you can get re-inspired. Best of luck to you.

~Tai

Or at least all the memories they wanted her to believe she had.

She knew better. She was not an idiot.

She was not an idiot enough to let them know she knew. No, they would haul her off and mess with her again.

At least, they’d try.

It wasn’t like she was planning on doing anything. There was nothing she could do without her basic essentials. Besides, when her first plan fell through because of her backstabbing partner, she really couldn’t muster up the courage or the gumption to continue what she started.

~Smart. Very smart. :D

“Lord Malak is a dunderhead who doesn’t know the first thing about what he’s doing.” She walked briskly around the choking Sith, her eyes glaring. “He doesn’t listen to his superiors about the real reason of things. He prefers to blow things up and ask questions later; he’s lost his mind to the drivel nonsense of the Dark Side.”

She dropped her hand and the Sith slipped onto the ground, gasping for breath. In a moment her foot connected to his ribs and sent him flying across the room.

“If that fool had listened to me instead of going off in his own direction, none of this would have happened, and I sure as hell wouldn’t be stuck in the most devastating situation to be conscious for!” She screamed. In an instant she picked up her blade and threw it at the Sith, catching him in the chest.

~Whohoo! Go Rev!! :D

“You could be Darth Revan reincarnate,” Carth looked away. She paled, resting a hand on her holstered blaster. “But that’s pretty impossible.” She let out the breath she didn’t know she was holding. “Besides, you asked me to prove who I was. That’s proof enough for me…. For now.”

Good, at least he wasn’t always this trusting. While a totally paranoid being could be annoying, nothing irked her more than someone so gullible as to believe everything told to them, even without using a Mind Persuasion.

~Hehe, your Revan is hilarious, as is Carth. :-)

She was not an idiot. Revan was revered to the Republic as someone to be feared, she knew. To reveal her real name now would either cause Carth to think her crazy or cause him to kill her.

~:D And I love the explanation for not losing her memories-brilliant.

Seriously awesome tale. Just brilliant! :D

And best of luck on getting back up to speed on your AOTC story-ouch, losing flash drives suck!

Yuppers, it's me. :D

Pretty interesting fic, actually. I sorta remember some of these things from KOTOR... but been a while since I played it. xD; And I never finished it, either. xP

I can tell that you've suddenly fallen out of it...Naver Kalam... yes, you definitely need help on getting reinspired. I hope your get it!