je t'aime! that was wicked! :-) wow carry on!

I loved the fic tell me when it is not TBC

ooh...a cliffhanger. it's good. i just love the romance between Rachel and Tobias, but what about Cassie and Jake? just a little bit of a hint...!

wow! (sorry that's all i can say...)

Very cool. I like it a lot. I can't wait for the next part. Just watch your speeling...I mean spelling :o)

nice story.

A cross between good and okay.

Well, it was very good, but there were a lot of grammer errors that could've been fixed in a simple proofreading. Besides that . . . it was very good. Have the next part out soon!

I like it, but it needs a little work. There are some spelling and grammar errors here and there, but I think you've got a pretty good story going,

I dunno, parts here an' there were good, but the plot is incredibly cliched. There's some potential in the whole Rachel/Jake conflict, which is good, but what I don't get is why EVERYONE has this idea that Jordan an' Marco have to get together. So she says she likes him, does that mean she marries him or something?

That was kinda quick, but I liked the plot.

This is a great story! Ii was really thorough and it explained everything very well. Good job!

Cool. NO REALLY. ALL THAT AND MOO MMOOMOMMOOOOOO. (600)