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mannd1068
2009-11-21 . chapter 25
Good story, can't wait to read the sequel
CatWriter
2009-11-12 . chapter 20
I had originally hoped that Harry and Naruto would grow up together, but as Minato is Naruto's father, it's doesn't seem likely, though I can see Harry and Kakashi raising the kid. People already think something's up with Harry, having him raise the demon kid naruto could be a bit of problem. Yes I know the story is finished, I'm just saying...

Catwriter
Midori Heiwa
2009-11-07 . chapter 26
this chapter was lolz, and if off the the next story (small trumpets sound then become haphazard as the i trip on my own feet attempting to fly to the next story)
Skedaddle-San
2009-10-31 . chapter 26
Great job in writing this up, the gag section was bloody brilliant! And now i'm channeling Ron. *facepalm* On another note, I love Harii. That is all.
Keep up the awesomeness, looking forward to reading the sequel. xDD

-Sked-San-san does not make sense.
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Blume
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
hi!
I sorta... made fan art based on your universe.
I'm not sure if you'd like ir ot not...
in any case! see it for yourself and tell me what you think!
http:// greenapplefreak . deviantart . com / art / Siblings-last-minute-tips-140508372

...just.. you know, thake out the spaces ^^;
Phoenix Firestorm
2009-10-04 . chapter 26
good story, this is one pairing that I never thought of before and have to admit that it turned out pretty good. Although there are times when I just want to grab Kakashi and give him a good hard shake to make him loosen up around his brother.
I'm glad that Naruto will have a friend in Hari, so there will be at least one person in the village that won't be against him just for existing.
crusaders564
2009-10-03 . chapter 4
great story did the durslys die?
Salamander Hanzo
2009-09-29 . chapter 26
nice
Loatroll
2009-09-03 . chapter 26
Great work! Thanks for the tremendous read! I dunno what else to say, very good characterization of all the characters, and just well done merging the two worlds. I also love that you included Tenzou, I don't think anyone has ever done anything like that before actually, I really liked the way the Yondaime found out Orochimaru's betrayal of human decency :P

Thanks for the read.
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 18
It was a wonderful feeling of freedom. Sarutobi didn’t have any responsibilities. He could paint all day and no one would yell at him for getting behind on paperwork. He could spend hours studying what he wanted when he wanted. He could harass his children about sleeping in too late, or eating unbalanced meals, or that disgusting habit of smoking cigarettes his youngest seemed to be picking up—not that Asuma ever listened to anything he had to say on the matter. He could set his oldest up on all the blind-dates he wanted, because he was darn well old enough to start having grandchildren and his good for nothing kids just weren’t providing like they were supposed to!




lmao! awesome. who knew the third nagged and set his kids up with blind dates? X'D
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 13
of course minato would have fun with inventing a load of bull. XD awesome! i love his little schemes and plots. coolest sensei ever!
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 11
oh man. bummed that obito died in this chapter

but the story of rin and her brother cracked me up


and this was a comedy gold

Jin scowled at his brother, “You never look after me,” he commented sourly, “You’d always beat me with something instead of helping me.”

“I was helping you learn to be humble,” Ken returned haughtily.
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 10
aw, poor kids.
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 8
hahahaha! the birthday party! loved it, harry and minato shopping for presents was really cute and of course minato WOULD be more excited then harry. XD

and who knew asuma would team up with obito JUST to torture kakashi? classic!

also...good to see that james didn't seriously freak out about it.
Little Kunai
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
oh yes...life's many surprises. lol XD! and won't james potter be surprised?
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