This story deserves a lot more reviews - and more than the pathetic one I'm about to leave. Your writing concise and commands attention with the odd titles. The phrasing easily brings up the general feeling of nostalgia, and the concepts are well-thought out. The capitalization (or lack thereof) was a fantastic idea on your part. It adds some measure of other-worldliness and made me smile.

heehee!

ow - sweet - kurogane - you love you love your princess - she wipped you good

yay!... finally another

person that loves this couple!

they r my fav pairing!

plus i dont like yaoi...its just too...xS

well, you should write more

about them and you should try

writing something longer

thanx and please keep going!

cUTE!. Kuro/Tomo fics are always enjoyable. Please continue writting.