   Godschildtweety 7/7/11 . chapter 6Cute story |
| anonymous 12/4/05 . chapter 6 This has to be one of the most confusing stories I've ever read...I'm still not sure about what happened. |
| Fiendish-Serena 1/6/05 . chapter 6 Again, this is one of your earlier stories, not as well written as some of your newer ones. It is a very brilliant idea and I think it would be great with a little revising. |
| confused little girl 8/20/04 . chapter 6 i think i'm ulterly comfused.. what was that? so they were together once before she left him? Hun please. do some revising and change the order around and i'd probbaly love it to death.. |
| ninja fysh 3/10/04 . chapter 6 WOW! wat an awesome chapter 4 the ending! is there a sequel! sure the ending sucked, but it was still a good ending! |
| Demonica Angelicus 10/30/03 . chapter 3 Your grammar needs some serious work. Without proper grammar structure your story becomes choppy and incoherent. Try getting a beta reader/editor to help you out. |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 6 I love it |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 5 I love it |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 4 I love it |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 3 I love it |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 2 I love it |
| Demonia 6/27/03 . chapter 1 I love it |
| SilverSerenity 6/23/03 . chapter 6 I'm thinking of revising this story after I finish another one |
| schoolgirltil2005 8/29/02 . chapter 6 Loved it! Wish u would write atleast one more chapter about the wedding and so on! Great writer! |
| Aylee the Dragon too lazy to log in 11/28/01 . chapter 6 That was a good story you rushed it a bit but I still liked it. |
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