This is a very weird and odd story. But god I would be lying if I said I didn't like it. I love it! It feels more drama like and humor but that's a moot point. I hope to see more chapters in the near future. Until then. ^_^Ja ne!

That ending was so cute! I can't wait for more.

Excuse me for a moment.

:ohmygoshtheyaresocuteandperfectandsheisakittenandhesbeenwaitinghiswholelifeandsqueek:

*Ahem*

This was a great chapter. Except that it's the last one!
:needs more:
I cannot wait. At all.

<3

WHAT DID HE SAY?!?!
Oh my goodness!

:dies:

Wow. Awkward.
Hmm.. I'm not sure how to review this one, since we were discussing it while I read. I love the comparison of their respective trips to the resturaunt. Some interesting parrallels.
See you in a chapter. =]

... Termination?
Harsh.
Hehe, anyway, this was also an awesome chapter. (I use that adjective a lot... o.O )

I am exploding with excitement to read her story!

I love the first paragraph of this chapter.
*ahem*
Anyway, this is just as good (if not better than) the 1st chapter. (Even if someone is distracting me on Yahoo messenger while I read it XD) It is very good, and pretty revealing. Off to read more!

M... Lot's of potential for an awesome story here. Definitely an awesome beginning. I can't wait to read ch. 2, but since I will die at the hands of a rollerblade if I don't review, I must wait! Curse you! Anyway, looking good. =]

X3 I love the little bit at the end, and I love You for updating! Please do so again soon.

Jesus christ lady i spent hours talking to you about his fic and now you're making me review it too?!?!
well here i am!!
um you basically know what i'm gonna tell you cauz i sorta did already!
so her goes the shorted version.
Kaoru BONER - hilarious
Kagome - uber cute
Hikaru - douche
Kyouya - jealous (needs to get banged)
Kagome & Kaoru - THE BEST FREAKING THING IN THE WORLD

Oh and i my eyes like zoomed to the place where you said "per se"
I was like WIN!
hahaa ily Shannel!!
<3

very interesting chapter. i cant wait to see how things will develop from here. keep up the hard work. im looking forward to the next part.

Yes! You updated! This chapter was pretty cool. Keep up the good work!

you dont know how happy me and all the poor bystander's are

Dude, this chapter was absolutely fantasmic!

I seriously love you in a non-awkward way.

;) haha.

Update soon!

R ii N G o K i T S U N e

drama drama oh how i love drama, can you please wright the next chapter... im begging you,please... if you dont im going to posably kill someone in my sleep and i will do it im mentally unstable ask anyone :P