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Interesting. I like how things played out. Things seemed "natural" and not too "planned." Good job. Look forward to the other chapters. Until then I'm heading over to Perpetuality.

I have read this like more then 10X and I can't believe i haven't reviewed yet! I LOVE IT! It just so Seto.

You write him extremely well. I just love the genteelness and very believable flow of events. plus its so FREAKING CUTE!

so sweet...

Hey this sounds great :D

i avnt read ur other fic yet i tink i mite wait til u finish this one and then get started on it coz it sounds awesome! :D

this was sweet i liked the part at the end with the last picture haha

cant wait for more so i hope u update soon!

Well, I finally remembered to read this for once while I was on the computer. And I like it! What do I have to say about this? Um, I really enjoyed it! I thought it was wonderful, and it's funny that Mokuba is "kick-le-ish"!(play on kicking when you're tickled! my mom's like that, too!) Well, I guess that's all for now, but YOU NEED TO UPDATE Perpetuality! Just sayin'!

Grace

Aw. This was absolutely cute. XD Hope to read more.

write more

This was written so well! :) I'm glad you didn't put it in Perpetuality as a flashback scene though... I think it would throw the story off-balance. :3

Hehe, I loved the way Kaiba's mind seemed to wander at time. Thinking about embracing Katsuya. He should just give in! Although the Jou at the time would have most likely punched him since he still consider Kaiba a possible "friend".

Bah, I can't wait until Jou wakes up and smell the homones in Perpetuality! Can't let Seto do all the lusting now can't we? :P

All in all I liked the story. Don't worry you don't make a boring Seto at all!

Jou-pup the Cosplay Thief

O_O... somehow I missed this fic. I think I was too focused on Perpetuality updates.

I like seeing the same scene from Seto's POV... makes for an interesting read. Poor Seto, he only wanted to give Jou his gift. I dislike that bossy council girl though *shakes fist* No one disrespects Seto (and Jou) like that!

Glad to hear this isn't just a one shot. :)

Very, very lovely fic.

"Ugly face? That was a first. He’d have to be locking himself in a cave to never see my face again. I’m Kaiba Seto. Stupid puppy."

That was my favourite line. *hearts Seto*

I really liked the picture scene too. Haha. Made me laugh.

This review would have been more creative, but I must sleep now. O_O;

Great job with the prequel. I've been waiting for one. *shakes you*

LOL.

*hugs*

kaiba ... with his "hn.. heh's... " sounds so damn arrogant.. but smexy at the same time. i will forgive him for being arrogant. )

jou squealing? awesome.. with the legs being dragged *imagines it*

girls who don't have the balls to ask for pic don't get pic

girls who would ask still don't get pic.. man it's a lose lose situation for those girls...

his love for a "retarded" jou heheheh *retarded*

but yugi is also determined, passionate.. and etc.. but i guess he doesn't have a messy mop of blond hair.. yugi has warped triangular hair (not smexy)

I'm finally getting a chance to sit down properly to read and review your fic I wasn't online long enough to review til now X_X Anyways, starts to read...

"Jounouchi Katsuya—an intruder..."

I like the way you've set up Seto's thought process it's so him, kind of analytical. And once he noticed something off, that something being an intruder in the form of Jou in his mind, I feel that it's very plausible for Seto to start to question himself on the 'whys' and 'why is that.'

"...meaningless, counterproductive, profitless and a hindrance and thus a waste of time!"

Seto's self-denial and the fact that it feels like he is arguing with himself, is very funny XD Okay, maybe it's not self-denial yet, but moreso self-defense against his realizations? xD Never mind, it is self-denial -twated XD-

"...over and over again with my superior deck. Hn hn."

LOL, I must have the weirdest mind, but I thought Seto was talking about something else regarding his 'superior deck' XD Anyways, I found this statement hilarious and witty and very Seto-ish (if such a word exists xD)

"Why I ended up taking the long and tedious path to get these papers was because Mokuba wanted me to have a ‘normal life’"

I just love Mokuba and Seto's dynamics. I love how important Mokuba is to Seto and vice versa and the fact that Seto knows that his brother wanted him to have a normal life, is really sweet. The fact that Seto actually took that long path, shows a softer side of him that he doesn't want anyone to see.

"A red carpet would be rolled out to accompany the occasion once I step out of my limo in front of their door. Heh."

LOL Seto, you're so modest aren't you? xD Although, the statement is lessen by his self-satisfied 'Heh' because I think it made Seto actually cuter for me, as he's laughing like that to himself XD And yes, I am weird :P

Yay! they finally meet... hahah, I love their exchanges. Seto must have been shocked to be called 'ugly face.' ...And Hashimoto -frowns- and I think 'could see how fickle these women were?' about sums it up DX

"I loved it when he got this close..."

And, so do I -winks- ohohohohoh XD

And you know what I really like? I like the fact that there were obstacles preventing Seto from giving Jou the card, like Hashimoto and then Jou not answering the phone when Mokuba called. I think it helped build up the anticipation for when Seto finally gives it to Jou XDD

"probably expecting to see my blank expression morph into a happy one. Like hell. I glared at him and he elbowed me"

hahahha, I love this! I love this line especially.

"I wanted him to know that I never saw him as an enemy or inferiorly…"

I'm really glad you're writing this and it adds a lot to Perpetuality! Because I wanted to see their exchange like you did here -hugs you- I'll look forward to the rest of your 2 chapters and the next chapter for Perpetuality!

Great story! You're a really good writer, and I just loved the scene with Seto and Mokuba! Also, you portrayed Kaiba well. I was really a wonderfull one!