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amehoshi141
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
Uh-huh-smirks evily-
Okay anyways, I just wanna say I love this. Apparently you and Greenamberjade I got addicted to AU. Trust me, I never liked it before. :)
Mizu1411
2009-09-10 . chapter 3
Your stories are really awesome! Hope you update soon!
Matthew-Is-Mine
2009-09-03 . chapter 3
Omg, this took me forevers to read but it was so worth it! Thanks for uploading! I loved this chappie so much. You were very IC ^_^ Thanks for that lol, and I like how you worded this story, makes everything much more intriging! :) Keep up the asum job :D
GhibliGirl91
2009-09-03 . chapter 3
For starters this is bloody fantastic! I love them, the length is especially impressive. I assume you are a bit of a history buff.

I really only have two problems. One is the fact that certain details in the first and third are very much the same, i.e. the fight in the street ending with Rukia kicking someone in the goolies and Ichigo being afraid that she is going to be hurt. Then him deciding that he needs to persuade Bya to give him her hand. The second is that occasionally modern terms slip into the dialogue it kinda breaks the flow of things but other than that I bloody love it!
sketchbaka
2009-09-01 . chapter 3
<3

Love the theme, I think it's perfect for Rukia to be a dancer, and lol I never thought it could be so naughty. Love Mizuiro's teases also, hahaha. You write the characters so IC, though the smut was small, it was an enjoyable read <3 Thank you for writing this <33

Part 2 Part 2 Part 2 Part ( 'o')/!!
Shermometer
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
Don't mind a story being this long, if it is well written. Well done, I really like the perspective you've taken on this. I'm not sure how you get to 50 though.
Mikaoru
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
I love your AU's. I'm generally not so fond of them, but yours are amazing. I really like how you portrait Rukia and Ichigo and always keep them IC.

Talking about this one, the almost 11,0 words did not feel like that at all, I wanted to keep reading, so that's great for someone like me, who gets bored inmediately xD

Good job <3
Sim-chan
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
A very well written ichiruki fic..i've been dieing to read a 'lemon with plot' ichiruki for so long and this is perfect. we are kind of deprived of sweet ichiruki M rated oneshots so 'm really glad that you have added another beautiful one. i hope we get more from you soon..Thanks
XxdaniXx
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
i love this chapter so much!
it was awesome!
until next time, see ya!
demon*feathers
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It had a beginning, a middle, and a satisfying ending. I really liked it. It can't believe your commitment. You started it in June and kept up with it. I wish I had that kind of devotion. Then perhaps my writing would actually get done... Thank you so much for such a great story!
Kisu
2009-08-31 . chapter 3
As always, it was just...
Pretty awesome my dear Syn.
You perfectly know how to make Ichigo and Rukia IC, something that isn't easy when we're talking about AU universe.
Dancer Rukia is the sexiest thing I've ever seen, what a lucky Ichigo!
STILL! I'm not happy about the lemon! TOO SHORT! XD I'm sad!
I'm sure Ichigo agrees with me!

I hope your next AU IchiRUki will be out soon! <3
i'll wait for it!
XxdaniXx
2009-07-23 . chapter 2
Great chapter!
these one-shots are really good!
hope to see an update soon!
XxdaniXx
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
really good first chapter!
i loved it!
VanishingSoul
2009-03-27 . chapter 2
Another awesome story. And we just finished the French Revolution, or rather the Congress System, but spent 90% on the FR.

The dinner/i love you thing is great, seems like it left us hanging with the promise of lemon...*pout* :P
VanishingSoul
2009-03-27 . chapter 1
I love this! Especially the end, hah, finding out the person you finally 'found' rejected you previously.

And I can't believe I actually know who Matilda and Stephen are. School does have it's uses, though it's still amazing i remembered b/c i learned about their fight over the English thrown about 5 months ago.

...Ichimaru...*shiver*
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