so cute :D

Great job! I love the story!

Continue writing about the drunken Mi-chan and his Fuuko.

FUUKOxTOKIYA FOREVER!

so sweet.i loved it;)

AW...!1! Kawaii! It was so dreamy of him to say that in his dream that he was Fuuko's property! WOw...

Good job! There are a few grammatical errors. It would be good if you looked into them

Good points: Charming plot. And Mi-chan saying he’s Fuuko’s property sure is cool. Great lines, smooth script.

Bad point: None, in my opinion.

I love it.

IT'S HILARIOUS! HA HA HA!

'I'm only Fuuko Kirisawa's property!' ha, ha, ha!

And Fuuko's irritation of Mi-chan being drunk is amusing too...

Great Job!

this story is so kawaii

tokiyaxfuuko 4eva :)

m.s.

ooh... I liked the ending :)

Awhahaha... Aw! That's cute!

I love saying this, "Please, don't! Stop! I'm only Fuuko Kirisawa's property!" LOL!

I thought for a second that the beginning said,

"Please, don't stop!" LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! LOL! XD

i just have to review to reply to some reviewers in this story...

abby: i wanted it that way..cliffie..lolz!hehe ty abby-chan!

aki reinhart: hmm yea, its familiar since half of the plot was taken from a txt msg my close friend sent to me.. 's about a drunk husband and her hitler wife...

shenny(mommy): lolz...ill try..if i write oneshots from my own experience it will turn out funny with no happy endings, especially for tokiya since he'll found himself waking up in the hospital already...remember when mi-chan had soccer and got limped?he was being mean to me even in his lame stage so i beat his legs up!bwahahahahaha!

OD:yo, dude!thanks for the nice chats we had...you are actually YANAGI !

kc: i wanted to say it isnt you...but IT IS U.*innocent look*

wija:eh?na dont get a french boyfriend..they're hot and !

I like the story but I think Toki-chan sould say more then that... *blush*

Nice story!

lolz, funny but your story is quite familiar. ive felt ive read this before somewhere. but anyways, it was really cute. ) good job. )

kyaa! :)

waii! :)

sweet! :)

ga! :)

i love it,.,.

i definitely love it,.,.

it was so cute,.,.

and sweet,..,

and great,.,.

and did i mention it was,.,.

CUTE! :)

kyaa! :)

i really like this,.,. :)

keep up the good work! :)

Tokiya-Fuuko fan forever! :)

Oh!

I love this fic...

huhuhu

I really miss making fics and I am still not finished with my last fic!

I am so busy...

Anyhow... I love the drunken-mi-chan!

Nee-chan... can you draw the last scene... please... *puppy-dog eyes* *grin*

That was cute