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DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 16
'Doumeki himself looked neither victimised nor particularly saddened by her proclamation, which Watanuki could only take as a sign of extreme mental retardation.'

Or stoic-ness! Bwah, kisses and bickering and well-that's-what-they-do-in-the-comics business was wonderful. Thank you for this entertaining fic!
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 14
Oh, huh. Watanuki sounds almost unhinged here. A side note, but I like his name, too.
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 12
“Just imagine.” *snorts* Snappish, isn't he?
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 11
Oh, wow, the last line was a hilarious one.

Watanuki: I'm late! I'm late! I'm - without my clothes. Uh.
Doumeki: *unimpressed* I think you might have torn my sleeve off. I'll need to borrow something to wear.
Watanuki: Mine won't fit you!
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 10
“I don’t look anything like him!” With just these few lines, my supehero-fangirl twitched and woke up.

Watanuki's slip-up “It wasn’t my idea!” and him flipping out and accusing Doumeki of being a supervillain was great.

“You’re going to blackmail me, aren’t you?”
“Why not? What are you offering?”

See, he walked right into that one. I want to see this is comic now, especially Yuuko's dramatic posing.
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 8
'-said Watanuki, typically putout by the nerve Doumeki showed by existing all over the place like that.'

That has to be my most favorite line ever in this fic.
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 7
“And she thought it was cute!” Poor Watanuki, life just loves picking on you.
DarkAngelKisses
2009-07-17 . chapter 3
:laughs: Oh, this has a lot of good little bits about, funny and believable, but it's the fact that you've compiled a ton of AUs that could be out their *somewhere* in canon that makes me love this.
dormitos
2009-04-12 . chapter 15
wow. i read the apocalyptic au last, and i like the darkness of it, and how you imagined everyone's roles would work out in such a twisted world. kudos to you on that.
dormitos
2009-04-12 . chapter 16
it's official. i love you. thank you for writing all of these :)
especially the superhero one. i like d/w, so i was happy when you worked in a romantic element on that one while keeping doumeki's personality so straightfaced and collected. it's awesome how he never even considers angsting out.
dormitos
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
omg, thank you thank you thank you for writing/posting this. this first chapter is SO. PERFECT.

XD

i really loved the line about the eyepatch. plus, the thing about rum was hilarious too. i can't wait to read the other au's you've written.
lily23
2009-01-30 . chapter 16
All of these stories are so great. I was sad when each one ended, but then chapter 3 could show up, and it would be okay.
Spiegel
2009-01-25 . chapter 16
These were brilliant. I particularly love the pirates and superheroes ones. Nothing beats Doumeki annoying the heck out of Watanuki.
Turtle Kid
2008-11-07 . chapter 16
All these are so--so--so character-like it's funny!
yuMeNami
2008-10-29 . chapter 15
aw..i wish theres a followup story for this..or separate story at least..i like it!!
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