Exquisite! The images, the style - all captivating.
I look forward to reading more of your work.

I'm not normally a big fan of first person POV, but I enjoyed this. You really captured a simple, yet beautiful moment. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!

Wonderful story, I really enjoyed it. Good job.

Stunning!

Wow!! What a way to prove you do have to use smut or profanity to make a simply marvelous story. I try to make constructive comments when reviewing because I review the way I wish to be reviewed...but in all sincerity, I can make no suggestion that would improve your story. It is already perfection.

It's beautiful. There is nothing more to say. Just beautiful written.