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| stareagle 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseExquisite! The images, the style - all captivating. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
| microgirl 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI'm not normally a big fan of first person POV, but I enjoyed this. You really captured a simple, yet beautiful moment. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story! |
| LouAnn 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story, I really enjoyed it. Good job. |
| StarlaMarie 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseStunning! |
| felena1971 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWow!! What a way to prove you do have to use smut or profanity to make a simply marvelous story. I try to make constructive comments when reviewing because I review the way I wish to be reviewed...but in all sincerity, I can make no suggestion that would improve your story. It is already perfection. |
| lacoma 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful. There is nothing more to say. Just beautiful written. |