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Flower Of The Slum
2008-08-08
ch 4,
abuseAwwh man you have to finish this T_T

you've left me in suspense XD
pinkpower
2008-08-03
ch 4,
abuselol. You go, Aerith! I hope we get to learn why Cloud and her divorced in the first place!
Sora G. Strife
2008-07-29
ch 4,
abuseWoah. I will only give one review, because I don't have that much time for all four chapters. I was totally taken back by Scarlet. I mean, of all the things I read, nothing has made me nearly fall of the chair after reading it.

I like the way that you let them devise a semi-evil plan to get them back together. Of course, I think this one is great.They're always great. Goodbye.
flammula
2008-07-15
ch 4,
abuseSO GOOD huhuhu X3 hope you'll continue this fic ! =D I thought it changes for once, to see Cloud as Roxas and Sora's father, and with Aerith being the mother, so much better x33
I'm looking forward to th wext chapters =D
Bye !!
Lydia-aerithlove
2008-07-09
ch 4,
abuseOh mai gosh, this story is so so moviee-like and lovly!! I love how Sora and Roxas are worried about their parents~ They're just adorable. And geez Aerith rocks!! The final line of her kicks *ss and shove it off Scarlet's face!Thanks for sharing, keep it up, plz!!
Wild Fantasy
2008-07-08
ch 4,
abuseOuch, Scarlet hit below the belt on her hint of the marriage. And yes, this will really help out Sora and Roxas' plan to reunite their parents! ...I hope. ^_^;

I loved the "throwing tantrums/should throw her out the window instead" part, I laughed big-time! XDD

Keep going, I wanna see how this unravels! ^_^
Lollypop
2008-07-07
ch 4,
abuseThe little spiky haired family is so cute! And Aerith still loves Cloud! Hooray!
Kaleta
2008-07-05
ch 4,
abuseI've waited for this chapter for so long! thank you so much for updating! Its absolutely wonderful! i wonder what Cloud will do now!! =DD

Great work! cant wait for the next chapters!
windsion
2008-07-04
ch 4, anon.
abuseYeah!!
Aerith is the best~~!!(*Laught*)
The last part is awesome and i hate Scarlet so much now based on what she had said...
Cloud you really should fix your taste on women.(Haha~escept Aerith)
And i really widh they could be together soon, or something good happen in them
Clerith is my favorite pair!
But somehow i don't want let Cloud to be that easy to get Aerith back...(hehe)
Princess of the Knight
2008-07-02
ch 4,
abuseWow I'm glad to see you updated. I love it. I hope you can write more soon!

Princess~~
LilyMione-chan
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abusehuahuahua!
i LOVED that last part! it's amazingly great! i still am laughing a lot! Aerith's the best, so far, heheh

i love this fic! i'll wait anxiously for the next chappie
^.~

Cheers!
kenkenspatz
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abuseYay you're back! *Hugs* God...can I strangle Scarlet now?
advent of the angel
2008-06-29
ch 4,
abusesora is such a little troublemaker lol

update soon!
Kaleta
2008-03-23
ch 3,
abuseOMG! i so cannot wait for the next chapters! :3 chapter 3 was amazing!
advent of the angel
2008-03-22
ch 3,
abusewhoa! you can't just leave it at that!

please don't wait another couple of months to update, it's a great idea

and it totally makes sense

Roxas and Sora's Crazy Hair = Cloud's Chocobo Head

Cloud, Blonde: roxas Blonde

Aerith, Brunette: Sora, Brunette

Hope to read another chapter soon!
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