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| Flower Of The Slum 2008-08-08 ch 4, | abuseAwwh man you have to finish this T_T you've left me in suspense XD |
| pinkpower 2008-08-03 ch 4, | abuselol. You go, Aerith! I hope we get to learn why Cloud and her divorced in the first place! |
| Sora G. Strife 2008-07-29 ch 4, | abuseWoah. I will only give one review, because I don't have that much time for all four chapters. I was totally taken back by Scarlet. I mean, of all the things I read, nothing has made me nearly fall of the chair after reading it. I like the way that you let them devise a semi-evil plan to get them back together. Of course, I think this one is great.They're always great. Goodbye. |
| flammula 2008-07-15 ch 4, | abuseSO GOOD huhuhu X3 hope you'll continue this fic ! =D I thought it changes for once, to see Cloud as Roxas and Sora's father, and with Aerith being the mother, so much better x33 I'm looking forward to th wext chapters =D Bye !! |
| Lydia-aerithlove 2008-07-09 ch 4, | abuseOh mai gosh, this story is so so moviee-like and lovly!! I love how Sora and Roxas are worried about their parents~ They're just adorable. And geez Aerith rocks!! The final line of her kicks *ss and shove it off Scarlet's face!Thanks for sharing, keep it up, plz!! |
| Wild Fantasy 2008-07-08 ch 4, | abuseOuch, Scarlet hit below the belt on her hint of the marriage. And yes, this will really help out Sora and Roxas' plan to reunite their parents! ...I hope. ^_^; I loved the "throwing tantrums/should throw her out the window instead" part, I laughed big-time! XDD Keep going, I wanna see how this unravels! ^_^ |
| Lollypop 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abuseThe little spiky haired family is so cute! And Aerith still loves Cloud! Hooray! |
| Kaleta 2008-07-05 ch 4, | abuseI've waited for this chapter for so long! thank you so much for updating! Its absolutely wonderful! i wonder what Cloud will do now!! =DD Great work! cant wait for the next chapters! |
| windsion 2008-07-04 ch 4, anon. | abuseYeah!! Aerith is the best~~!!(*Laught*) The last part is awesome and i hate Scarlet so much now based on what she had said... Cloud you really should fix your taste on women.(Haha~escept Aerith) And i really widh they could be together soon, or something good happen in them Clerith is my favorite pair! But somehow i don't want let Cloud to be that easy to get Aerith back...(hehe) |
| Princess of the Knight 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseWow I'm glad to see you updated. I love it. I hope you can write more soon! Princess~~ |
| LilyMione-chan 2008-06-29 ch 4, | abusehuahuahua! i LOVED that last part! it's amazingly great! i still am laughing a lot! Aerith's the best, so far, heheh i love this fic! i'll wait anxiously for the next chappie ^.~ Cheers! |
| kenkenspatz 2008-06-29 ch 4, | abuseYay you're back! *Hugs* God...can I strangle Scarlet now? |
| advent of the angel 2008-06-29 ch 4, | abusesora is such a little troublemaker lol update soon! |
| Kaleta 2008-03-23 ch 3, | abuseOMG! i so cannot wait for the next chapters! :3 chapter 3 was amazing! |
| advent of the angel 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abusewhoa! you can't just leave it at that! please don't wait another couple of months to update, it's a great idea and it totally makes sense Roxas and Sora's Crazy Hair = Cloud's Chocobo Head Cloud, Blonde: roxas Blonde Aerith, Brunette: Sora, Brunette Hope to read another chapter soon! |