I love this story. It's fantastic. :)

Superb, thank you!

Nice job. I liked the format, with the little informational excerpts in the middle, and I love how you put the beginning at the end. Awesome sox! XD

Good. Really good, no GREAT! Thanks.

Found this with nothing better to do except see what I have missed. Loved all the factual element. This is one of the reasons I do not like Oncology nursing. I would be heaving with them. It's bad enough with all the drunks.

Cleverly done. The story was excellent with lots of interesting details supporting the plot.

I think your attention to detail is another contributing factor to why your stories work. The other factors are that you have talent (very important), the characterizations are down to a "T" and your stories have this flow that carries us through to the end.

So glad you are writing Atlantis fics. BTW, I'm going to read your Supernatural fics, too, since it is one of my other favorite shows. OCT 4th! (if u are in the states)

Excellent story! Loved it

Great story. Love how the team pull together! Wonderfully done will rec highly!.

I like it.

Wow, that was intense and suspenseful! Putting in the medical jargon really made it seem more real. I enjoyed reading the different POV's and Chuck’s line regarding Sheppard’s reputation was priceless. Excellent job!

I really enjoyed this-your use of the stark technical data to support the story and heighten the drama and tension was original and very well done, the characterizations were lovely, the whole story is engaging and enjoyable!

One detail is bugging me, though, and did rather interfere with the story's effect for me: when Carson was about to enter the Jumper, the reading on Roberts' scanner is 9 Sv, which according to the facts you supplied means near-100% fatality, and necessitates a bone-marrow transplant. Carson's initial reaction to that ("It makes his heart sink and his chest ache in a way that can't be comforted.") seems to confirm this. Yet the rest of the story proceeds as if Shep has absorbed only 2-3 Sv. IMHO, an edit to rectify the discrepancy (or explain it?) would perfect the fic.

Oh that was lovely! Great dramatic opening with a real build up of tension... I really felt that we were waiting along with the team to find out whether Sheppard would be ok! Loved the depiction of his slow recovery too and his team mucking in to look after him.

Very well done! You did do a lot of research, didn't you? It is much appreciated!

Wow! That was really intense and kind of scary. Your research really paid off and gave me plenty to think about. I loved the comfort part of this story especially knowing that it could have been a lot worse. Ronon was a real trooper staying with John even though it was not really his thing.

Fantastic story - well done!