 WhimsicalShmoo 2007-10-04 . chapter 1Cute...thanks for posting! |
 Helike 2007-09-11 . chapter 1So true... Usually we realize how much we've missed someone when we definitely don't expect it.
Poor Deidei, I guess that after all it was much easier to work together with Sasori than with Tobi. The latter seems to be too energetic sometimes, plus, he has one very irritating habit, huh? ^^; I work with such a person myself, so I know something about it >_>;
Anyway, good job on this one ^^ |
 Scarlaluna 2007-09-10 . chapter 1Beautifully short and touching. I like it. It was interesting how he was so blunt and serious with Tobi while working with his clay, obviously determined to push harder than usual.
LAWL, only now did I just realize you even used the adjective "bluntly" to describe the way Dei was talking to Tobi. xD I didn't know.
I love fics with Dei missing his danna. ;.; |
 Kanoi-chan 2007-09-10 . chapter 1Aw, more DeiDei! Pretty ficcy! |
 EasterOfFlesh 2007-09-10 . chapter 1AW. DEIDARA. *sniffle* I'm glad to see that Sasori hasn't been COMPLETELY forgotten! :D |
 Shashuko the Paisley Maiden 2007-09-10 . chapter 1aww.. I loke tobi and all, but i feel bad for deidara. imagine-- no only do he lose his danna, but sasori was replaced by that annoying guy! poor, poor dei-chan... |
 I'll Be Your Lie 2007-09-10 . chapter 1That is so cute! Love the story/ thing! ^_^ |
 Jaime Snyder 2007-09-10 . chapter 1Awe, so sweet!! It's so sad about Sasori...T_T Awesome little ficlet thingy. Nice! |