You have the good Abbot to a T, I think. He always seemed to be rather more worldly than his Calling really gave him credit for. Recall when the new priest was so, inflexible, and the girl committed suicice? Radulfus was quick to point out the difference between the letter of the Law, and the spirit of the Law.

Have any other chapters to add to the books? I don't think Ellis Peters would mind too much, given your ability.

Well done! You've captured Radulfus perfectly.

Lovely addition to the novel. I remember cheering when Priot r Robert's hopes were thoroughly quenched.

Nicely written and I have always felt that he always got annoyied with the Prior's and Brother Jerome's lack of wordly knowledge.

Hello! I loved this story! It fits very well with the books and the characters. Great job! Thank you.

vary nice exploration of some secondary charcters. hope to read more

Very nice little story and very much in character! You've guessed Radulfus' thoughts well, one can really imagine that he thinks in such a way about his new fellow brothers. Well done!