Guh... I chocked up at that last line! Short but very sweet (and a bit bitter... but hey, the good kind) Great job ^_^

so cute ^^

Lovely. I really enjoyed this. Zack was so wonderful and Cloud so broken and it just really fit in that little FFVII goodfic hole I've been dying to fill.

omg as soon as i got the alert for this i was like - back button ! - cuz i looved the name of the title so much, i read it again - and aw this was soo cute, and yeah zack is so understanding - he didn't even mean why, poor cloud he failed aaww *huggles cloudy* ^-^

Absolutely beautiful ^_^

The prose is clearly considered and almost heartbreakingly SIMPLE. You've nailed the characters and their relationship and the world as you've spun it and just well done.

I really love this.

aww ... cute. and kinda bittersweet-sad.

I like this short =) (although since it's a short, I don't have too too much to say... >__>)

*wet eyed* oh~ that was so cute and not sad but sorta because now i can picture cloud after zack died and the whole metor she-bang ended driving around thinking about zack! *lip wibbles* cute! very nice.

Aww, that was sweet. I like the way you write Cloud and Zack.

I really liked this line: "...when he was just trying to find a reality with a Cloud-shaped hole he could fill."

Nicely done.

I'm so glad to see some ZackxCloud, they're one of my favourites =] This was very well written, and I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. Very decriptive, and very good choices of words that all came together nicely. 'absently wetting wind-chapped lips' *giggles* Writtin like flowing water, honestly. Can't wait to hear more from you. ^^

That was really sweet, and the ending was well done. I liked it ^_^