This is cute, I really like where it is going.

Wow! This is so well written! It's so detailed and written really similarly to the book, (which I've recently re-read for maybe the 5th time). I hope you can update soon!

Very good job, lovely!

Nice, love the idea, and very well written as well!

I've read the book recently, and I'm very surprised that there's only TWO stories on it.

This is a very good story so far.

Eclipse

You should change the category to Raptor Red section in Books. It's there now.

Oh my gosh, you've read this book, too? Wow, I thought it was only me! I loved it, and although it's been a while since I read it, I loved this story. The concept is phenomenal and I hope that you'll continue with this. Awesome job! :D

Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),

DL ('Dragon Lover')

Flipper Boid Skua,

That was an awesome first chapter! It's so nice to see a Raptor Red fic around here!

Spelling-wise, I would say you did darn near perfect. I unfortunately have yet to actually buy Raptor Red, I've only read it twice, both times being checked out of my school library. But, since I don't have the book with me, I'll go with the fact that you spelled all the life-forms names correctly. The only one I'm not sure how to spell is Ornithoceirus, but I think you spelled it right. Your grammar is also flawless. I praise and envy your perfection.

I like the way you wrote the story. It's written almost exactly like Robert T. Bakker himself would have written it. My only criticism is that it seems a little rushed, but at least it isn't scurried along hopelessly like a lot of stories are.

So, this Utahraptor is going to take care of an Acro, is she? I can hardly wait to see how this is going to turn out!

Once again, it is just awesome beyond words to see another Raptor Red fan around here, let alone a story!

Until next time, Flipper Boid Skua! I look forward to reading and reviewing the next chapter!

Signed with Humility,

Itanu the Author.

Intreasting so will the acro chick choose it's own kind? I read Raptor red already.

You're welcome, no problem.

Aww the baby acro's a mummy's boy! So cutehe calls for her like he's in trouble and she comes, then he's alright. _

But he's realizing he might not be a raptor type dinosaur after all.

Um, what book it's from...? Dah...Dinotopia? Well the Acros are ones I've never heard of...they sound exotic...so I'm thinking *maybe* Dinotopia...or something like that. I'm not sure actually, it was just a memory guess.

Cute widdle baby... (Tickles the baby acro under the chin)

(Chomp)

D:

All right! This is a cool story, and the first one about dinos I've read. More please? I'll favorite and come back.