Keep it going! It's really good.

Well they finally meet.Finally!Update soonest please.:)

Yay! They finally meet! That was exciting. And what did that guy give Lisa? I really want to find out soon. It's shapin up to be amazing and I can't wait to see how it ends!

Gosh,Lisa as an assassin? Who'da thunk it? Certainly not me! "Don't even think about it.If you'd disappeared without a word,they would've hired me to kill you." "You'd never have been able to pull it off." "Why? Because we screwed each other?" "No...because I'd kill you first,jackass." Ah,that's my Lisa.And she would've done it too! That they had to hide Rebecca reminds me of how Ben Kenobi had to hide Luke and Leia to protect them from the evil designs of the Emperor and Darth Vader. I was going to say update soon,but I don't want you passing out on the floor from exhaustion.Try not to think of all your loyal fans(like me)who check their e-mail everyday to see if there is a new chapter or story from you.LOL,just kidding!Take all the time you need. ^_^

Another wonderful chapter! You're building up the suspense wonderfully! I can't wait to see what will happen once Rebecca meets them and realizes who they are. Take your time in updating if you need to. I'll still be here waiting for the next update!

Hopefully this will be a fic with jackson and leese getting back together and getting things right between them??

this is a cool story ...but its confusing...explain

I have to say that this is a fantastic story! I was confused at first until I realized it was a sort of AU. And it is brilliant! I love how you use first and third perspective to tell the story from different sides. It's perfect! I understand about not being able to update quickly, but I do hope that you update soon!

Oh my,does this mean that Rebecca is actually Lisa's and Jackson's daughter? Judging from the cryptic notes in Rebecca's book it certainly seems so.And does this also mean that Lisa and Jackson knew each other as teens? That would've made them both nineteen when/if Lisa had Rebecca and maybe then Jackson ran away and joined the *company*(jerk).Is Rebecca on the same flight as her parents? Update soon please. :)

So the plot thickens ... . Can't wait to see where you're going with this; if Becca is anything like her parents, she will find a way. And not only will she find a way, she will find a way that'll totally surprise the both of them. Go Becca!

so a kid for jack and leese? Nice so how will they manage this?

A little confusing, but awesome work!

Well well well, let's see what you have cooked up this time, BregoBeauty! I'm intrigued already - how old is Becca? Who is her mother and how did she come to know Jackson? What kind of Jackson will you write in this story? Please update soon.

Oh no,You killed Lisa?! Well,I certainly have to say that is a switch, it's usally Jackson who dies. Boy is he gonna go on the war path when he hears Lisa's been killed! Go Jackson go!! :(

Happy birthday! Great start to this fiction!