 Pigeon 2007-09-10 . chapter 1 REVIEW!: As Sakura would say…Hoe! Da-umm, dang girl! (Whoops, sorry. Heh heh…) You keep getting better and better, I don’t care what you say. This was…well, near-perfect. And I’m not just talking about punctuation, although that’s certainly getting better too. But it flowed so well, and I could see her sparkling eyes, the emerald pins in her hair, Sakura tripping over her heels, and Syaoran noticing with amusement the flush in Sakura’s cheeks. It was…incredible! I could see the night, and Sakura hobbling over to the wrought iron bench, and feel the rock path under my own bare feet. This was simply marvelous darling. Hopefully I got all the mistakes, too… >_ |