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Reviews for: DaZed
Grey Fool
2008-02-11 . chapter 2
What no recent updates? keep on writing, you are really good.
puasluoma
2007-12-21 . chapter 2
updatee!
JaneTristanDoe
2007-12-21 . chapter 2
Loving the story^^ Please update soon =)
SilentCynara
2007-12-20 . chapter 2
Interesting premise. Please do continue :)
clapz
2007-09-12 . chapter 1
nice!
Pigeon
2007-09-10 . chapter 1
REVIEW!: As Sakura would say…Hoe! Da-umm, dang girl! (Whoops, sorry. Heh heh…) You keep getting better and better, I don’t care what you say. This was…well, near-perfect. And I’m not just talking about punctuation, although that’s certainly getting better too. But it flowed so well, and I could see her sparkling eyes, the emerald pins in her hair, Sakura tripping over her heels, and Syaoran noticing with amusement the flush in Sakura’s cheeks. It was…incredible! I could see the night, and Sakura hobbling over to the wrought iron bench, and feel the rock path under my own bare feet. This was simply marvelous darling. Hopefully I got all the mistakes, too… >_
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