This story is amazing, I can't believe how few reviews it got! i love your idea on how the story happens, and your characters were simply amzing. Excellent job!

00 Goodness. That's so utterly tragic but in a way it completely makes sense in a painfully real, allegorical sort of way. I couldn't improve on this at all.

And still, it's one of those things that leaves you feeling so nostalgic for those almost lifelike dreams of years ago, y'know?

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oh, how sad. The cycle is complete, to go again.
beautiful.

OH, so sad. I love it, but it is so depressing.

Ya know...I didn't even like Peter Pan(but I never read the book so I suppose it's probably different)and yet I'm sitting here crying my eyes out.

God.

This made me cry...

God, this is so brilliant and lovely! I adore the concept of Peter becoming Hook - and the way the new Peter comes for Belle at the end is just beautiful. I wish the third chapter had shown Liz's reaction to Peter not knowing who she is, but it's a good ending line. It's a wretched, painful cycle that I adore. This is quite possibly one of the best fics I've come across in the Peter Pan fandom - fabulous job.

Great Job, though you know your a stupid brat.

and will always be.


Though i do like the way you nicely ended it.

I do have to say its a typical ending for you.

(I do hope there is no sequel in the makes, cuz i think in this case the ending is perfect)

00 Drea, darling this is /fantastic/! This puts my little Rhapsody/Raziel scene to shame. I can't fault this at all and I can't wait for you to update. I'll try and do the same while I'm waiting. Sorry I took so long to review- life's been busy over here.

^__^ You write so well, you really do.

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I'm glad it was made into a two-shot.
I've never read something like this -
inspiring, mind-boggling. Amazing, simply put.
It substantially affected me,
though I don't know how. It's something like
a masterpiece, I think. I was a bit confused as
to who Liz was, however, and how she played into
Peter Pan, but nevertheless, fantastic.
Similar to love at first sight, you know.

Im happy you continued it, i haven't really had a decent thing to read in ages. By decent, i mean of course something you've written cuz your god.

I liked the image you painted when they disappeared from that place(honestly it makes sick thinking about that place, so i am not going to name it)

I also like the part where he kinda walked in her bathing, kinda reminds of a incident we had together. Gods i was so embaressed.

So update son, i want to see where your brillance leads us to next.

Oh and we need to get together soon cuz honestly not being around you for 2-3 months and randomly thinking of you all the time makes me miss you more.

Oh and Boys are not only silly, but stupid.

0.0 *stares in mesmerised manner*

You really do have to love those girls in asylums. ;)

That was seriously fantastic- you got such a good, developing sense of her character as the piece progressed and the pace worked brilliantly with the story. The concept of Pan as Hook is genius too! I'm sure I haven't heard of it before but it's possible I may have missed something since it fits son perfectly. At any rate, this was outstanding and it's going on my favourite stories list.

Please do continue this, say... to detail the change from Pan to Hook and/or to bring Pan/Hook back, perhaps? ^__^

That was really awesome! I wasn't going to read it, but I'm glade I did. ;)

That was a wonderful story. Truly it could have come from Barrie himself.

FlyingFaeriesDance

Wow, that was a really cool concept, like insightful, the riting of it bugged me a little, but the concept was so interesting, and well yea. There's this acting monolougue you might be interested in, unfortunately I don't know the name, I might eb able to find it though. It was a girl talking about when a group of children were brougth to see Peter Pan on stage, and it wsa screwed up, the actors kept trying to fly and were dying, but they just brought in replacements, and the crocodile which was real landed on a bunch of kids in the first row and they were replaced also, and tinkerbell died and though the children all calpped very hard Peterpan just turned to them and screamed " YOu didn't clap hard enough, and now Tinkerbell is dead and it's all your fault!" and he stomped off stage. Also there's a book called Wendy which you might find enjoyable, its about peter pan, but not really, but it is at the same time its hard to explain. Good luck with future writing.