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| UltraBeing 2008-06-30 ch 26, | abuseI pretty much agree with TheRavenQuoth. Although I'm very familiar with both the Animorphs and the Beast Wars show (and they both rock), this could have been written better. I also believe that Jake, Marco, and maybe even Tobias would recognize a Transformer when they saw one. Probably just me, but I think you should probably edit that in there. The Ani-Verse is very, very much like the world we live in. If James Bond and Barney the Dinosaur exist there, why not the culture of Transformers as well? Other than that the story is really interesting! Everyone's in character pretty good. I like the original plot. Keep that. :D |
| TheRavenQuoth 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abuseWell... This isn't the worst story I've read but it could be alot better. The story idea has potential but the exacution was flawed. It started rather suddenly, you should've done some more backstory. You also should take things like the lack of Kandrona rays for the Yeerks into consideration, without them the Yeerks all die within 3 days. You should also have explaned the Beast Wars verse a bit more for those of us unfamiller with the series. The group makes decisions too quickly. They went with the Maximals without having a good reason to. I hope this bit of constructive criticism helps. |
| Yellow 13 2008-05-01 ch 25, | abuseokay, so now the Yeerks are dropping like flies... just one problem: how are they getting BACK? |
| ahilty 2008-03-31 ch 24, | abuseWell, I can't say I am going to cry over Visser Three. All I can say is GO DINOBOT! |
| TJtrack99 2008-03-29 ch 24, | abuseCrossover fic! I'm glad I found this one. It's intriguing and the characterizations are great. I hope to see more! |
| Yellow 13 2008-03-28 ch 24, | abuseoh hell... somehow i get the feeling he's gonna morph into something nasty. my advice to the Animorphs and Maxamals: FALL BACK! |
| Yellow 13 2008-01-28 ch 22, | abusenice chapter, although if even the Visser is taken out along with all the other controllers at this point, it wouldn't matter if the secret was out. best course of action in my mind is: take them all out in one fell swoop. although that's jsut me and my mind plugging away here. anyways, can't wait for the next chapter! |
| ahilty 2008-01-27 ch 22, | abuseThe Maximals are really going to regret helping Visser Three... |
| Yellow 13 2008-01-13 ch 21, | abusecool chapter. looks like a big fight is comming up... can't wait! |
| Yellow 13 2008-01-02 ch 19, | abusenice chapyer, a little short, but ther'es probbaly a reason for that. anyways, i hope you can continue this! |
| KingWaspinator 2007-12-31 ch 17, | abuseHi. Great plot. Maybe Dinobot gets susipisious that the Animorphs will take them to their world and hand them to the Authorities? Like Rachel is with the Maximals. |
| Yellow 13 2007-12-18 ch 17, | abusenice story, keep it up, i want to see more! |
| Lord CrutchCricket 2007-11-08 ch 15, | abuseHmm... I like the idea but I must say Yeerks wouldn't stand a chance against Predacons (correct spelling). Megatron would have Visser Three for lunch, even with all his crazy morphs, yes... Other than that try and have more character interaction. You were wise to point out compatibilities between the characteristics of the Animorphs and Maximals. Just explore those more. Overall being a fan of both franchises, I await more. |
| The Gandhara 2007-09-24 ch 15, | abuseAn original idea for a crossover, and you did a good work portraying the personalities of the characters. The plot, however, isn't that interesting. |
| Kiseki no Tenshi 2007-09-15 ch 13, | abuseGreat story!! Can't wait to read more!! |