 thefastestturtle 2009-06-27 . chapter 28wow. is that all you will write? |
 thefastestturtle 2009-06-09 . chapter 11hi! |
 Soda-and-Rum 2009-06-07 . chapter 28 Ok, so I know this has obviously been a while since you updated this story, but YOU MUST MAKE THE CHAPTER NOW. 8| Please! It is of crucial importsnce that you update this story. :P XD
I also love the ending with Steve. Didn't see it coming! I think... That either dude would work. But why would that chick do that to Twobit?! Why!? Why?! 8'( |
 wolf luvers95 2008-12-07 . chapter 28im really enjoying this story. tons of twists ^^ cant wait for more! |
 Samantha.Nicolette 2008-11-16 . chapter 28this is the only few words i have to say ...
DAMN YOU JENNIFER!
and please ... MORE :) |
 Samantha.Nicolette 2008-11-16 . chapter 7*Smiles contently* I wasn't liking this 'jennifer' girl until this chapter, good job for changing it around :) |
 ShotgunOpera 2008-08-31 . chapter 1snow? in oklahoma?? Maybe a couple of inches, i hope you aren't talking like two feet! |
 qwerty 2008-06-01 . chapter 6 WOOHOO TWOBIT! YEAH!
(mutters) damn **...
yeah, jennys just a ** in this chappie.
i'll say it again
(mutters) damn **...
UPDATE SOON! (singsong) CHAPPIE 27!! =D
qwerty
**dont let anyone change you** |
 qwerty 2008-06-01 . chapter 1 O! I'm a summer person too! Thats kewl! =)
UPDATE SOON! I wanna see Chapter 29 and what steve does and if twobits okay (physically and emotionally)!
qwerty
**dont let anyone change you** |
 qwerty 2008-06-01 . chapter 28 oh yeah, did i mention b4"
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I LOVE YOUR STORY!
so,
UPDATE SOON!
luv ya,
qwerty
**dont let anyone change you** |
 qwerty 2008-06-01 . chapter 28 i know you said SLOW UPDATES but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!! T_T
the great thing about your story is that it is unlike other ones!! It has an original plotline and its REALLY good and i REALLY like it! =)
UPDATE SOON!
qwerty
**dont let anyone change you** |
 Only4Miken 2008-02-03 . chapter 28Oh crap. She's a little bit to late now. I wonder if she's gonna go running back to Two-Bit? update soon |
 Greaser Girl 4 Life 2008-02-02 . chapter 28*screams* YU UPDATES! *hugz* i loved this chapter! i think steve and two-bit r gonna get in a fight...uh oh |
 Only4Miken 2007-12-03 . chapter 27Oh god. Steve? She had to pick him of all guys.tisk tisk. |
 Greaser Girl 4 Life 2007-12-03 . chapter 27yay! luv the new chappie Ace! |