Amazing. Simply amazing. It may be a bit short, but what can you expect from a fic about a gameplay mechanic in a game with such a convoluted storyline as Killer7. I really loved it. I wonder if i could do something with it. Maybe make a YouTube video with this as a script. Just an idea, my mind works like that. Silly idea flashes sparked by the work of another. Keep up the good work.

DUDE!

This story is so freakin' cool! A great elboration on one of the creepier aspects of the game.

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Beautiful, nicely written. It's hard to write well in second person, but it works well here! A good description of 'the time between' for the personae.