I love this story. Good job.

this is beautifully written. all of the little details-down to the cherry pie filling-make it seem very real. I like it a lot; i've always wondered how Charlie and Tinga got together, and I like your version of it.

Deeper and deeper into the mind of Tinga... The details make this story very well-written. I can see it, and it helps me to understand her character. Very cool. :)

Another Wow piece! Very intense with Tinga's whole thought process around Charlie and then the tension when she is confronted by Zack. The whole way Zack talks about how he knows her better and how it won't last seems true, but Tinga saying she has to feel happiness even for a moment seems almost bittersweet in retrospective. Very well done but I wich Zack would have answered that question about when he realised he wasn't in Manticore.