 Jessie07 2009-11-02 . chapter 31Awesome story! |
 aisling13 2009-11-01 . chapter 31I love some of these oneshots. They're all really interesting ideas. |
 Shiruy 2009-10-22 . chapter 31I really, really like this story. ^__^ It's funny, and the new take on Sarah's character is very refreshing. I honestly don't know why no one else had the idea yet that Sarah could be military too. It's quite possible if you think about it. And I love how she dealt with meeting Ironhide. ^.^ |
 Mesonoxian 2009-10-20 . chapter 31That was funny!! XD |
 Cedarleaf 2009-10-20 . chapter 31Wow, Sarah's a badass! A very interesting take on a sadly overlooked character. Kudos! |
 Soului 2009-10-20 . chapter 31You know, you're the first person I've seen write a story where Sarah is military too. I don't know why anyone hasn't thought of it before. It makes so much sense.
Anyway, amazing chapter, this is probably one of my favorite intitial introductions between Sarah and Ironhide. Well done! |
 Lady Azar de Tameran 2009-10-20 . chapter 31Sarah was a bit of a badass in this one. I rather like this take on her. It's very refreshing and makes sense given what we know of Will.
Zari |
 Kaede Akira 2009-10-20 . chapter 31This was great! I like how you made it so Sarah was once a soldier too...I don't think I've seen it done before and it's a great idea! I like her shoot first and ask questions later...reminds me of a certain big black truck...lol..Speaking of which their interaction was done beautifully! |
 1Timberwolf 2009-10-20 . chapter 31Loved this chapter. |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-10-20 . chapter 31Sarah Lennox is BAD ASS.
X3
LOVE HER!
Well, this personification of her.
I can SO see her as a total bad ass former military lady.
Who ELSE woulds be able to keep Mr. Happy Guns in line?! |
 Jedi Buttercup 2009-10-20 . chapter 31I've been following this story for awhile, but this chapter is particularly fabulous. Why don't more people write Sarah Lennox as a fellow officer? I really like her strength and interaction with Ironhide here. |
 Jason M. Lee 2009-10-20 . chapter 31XD XD XD Mama Bear here! Too much time at the TV Tropes site. And a bit of "hee" on Ironhide playing along. A nice twist on Sarah's position as an military wife, being an actual member of the Army. :3 |
 ladyofdarkstar 2009-10-18 . chapter 5Oh wow. I just loved that chapter. I love the Xbox, too! And the logic behind why the cube-spawned bots were insane was perfect. I was thinking something similiar a while back, but never did anything with the idea. I love it. Thank you for writing that, and for giving life to some of the overlooked characters in the movie. :) |
 ArmoredSoul 2009-10-17 . chapter 30Of course it's a kid that makes everything alright.
The innocence and trust of a child can do wondrous things.
^^ |
 Mesonoxian 2009-10-17 . chapter 30Oh my gosh!! I love that little boy! |