MORE U MUST WRITE MORE!

im sad to see that you never did continue this story! it looked as if it would have been pretty interesting! ah well, maybe some day...

Wow...please update this, I'm intrigued!

Update please x-x.

This story is good... but Nikitsu or whatever already seems creepy.

Oh well, its well-written Ed and Al angst and thats enough for me (:

Marie

This is the story I've been waiting for! Please update soon - and torture Ed a bit. Torturing Ed is fun :3

Lol, interesting chapter. Poor Ed, having to vomit up all that blood. Must've really sucked, but at least Al lived through it...well...though he's going to be going through a living Hell with that gate baby thing in him, lol. That's going to really suck when he decides to start causing trouble, heh. Hope you update soon, even though I know that it's NaNoWriMo...but I don't think you have much to worry about, lol, you're writing faster than me since you have constant access to a computer. ;) Wish I did, but oh well, hehe. In any case, update soon, okay?

Ed coughing up BLOOD? *glares* this isn't gonna be a "I'm gonna kill Ed in a slow and painful way" fic...is it? Well, i'll probably still read it regardless, but if you kill off Ed, that means he can't be in the story anymore T.T He's too awsome to not appear! (Ed fan! .)

And Nikitou's already starting to scare me O.o; I think Al made a horrible mistake in letting that thing share his body...

Well, good chapter again! Can't wait to see what happens next...well I can if it's killing off Ed and taking him out of the story *glares again* Which ISN'T going to happen...right?

OMG, this is so cool! I lobve it! Keep up the great work!

...um..okay...*blinks* then what SHOULD I call him?...*blinks* And I guess...hurry with next chapter? *walks off*

Update! Cheers!

I'm too lazy to write a long and complex praise, so I'll just say this:

Great chapter. Continue.

...-goes back to sleep-

Yeah I'm not very creative when I just get out of math homework. Forgive me.

o o omg... I LOVE THIS! AWESOME! -jumps around in pure joy- Can't wait to read more

oh nose! Foreshadowing! XD Well, cool chapter. Please update soon. He, Al's in a wheelchair...why do I think that's funny?

woww I like this kind of creppy stuff plz hurry and update

ZOMG! THIS FIC SMELLS PWNFUL! IT SMELLS LIKE THE MANGA SECTION IN BORDERS! Squee!

Yay, okay, I will e-mail you, instead of telling you everything in reviews...but I'll still tell you stuff in reviews...'cuz...

ZOMG, did you just Izumify Ed and make him vomit blood! ... ... Good Ayumi! XD Izumifying Ed is fun!

And in case you're wondering, the manga section smells like Japan! Like ramen and shrimp and stuff! XD So, make Al go evil already! Make him go NUTSO CRAZY LOCO!... please.