Great story!

touching piece. well done. :)

this fic will always be one of those that sends chills down my spine.

awesome. that sent chills down my spine. i loved it. wonderful take on Brins reindoctrination.
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I must have somehow missed this one when it first came out. Great job on Brin. It seems like you've done Brin before, and she was a little off. You nailed Brin in this one. Very interesting how the other X-5s are bringing Brin back into the fold. I enjoyed it.

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A very intersting way of describing Brin's indoctrination. Her talk with Lydecker was particularly interesting as it is true that he defies them even of what he has been allowed to experience. I also like how she told him to remember her "how she was" before she's turned. We even get to see some of the reindoctrination process through the fight whihc was very intense. Very well written, well done.