aww that was good :) poor sammy :D thankyou xx

Really, really good. I'd love to read a longer more fleshed out version!

You sure do have a knack of writing stories that make people cry (or is it only me?). This was a great story. I love how you showed that Sam and Dean's bond as brothers was strong enough to help Sam through this. Their bond as brothers (in the show) is simply amazing, and I think you did it justice in this story.

This was recommended at LJ Supernatural Storyfinders Community as a good kidnapped Sam story. Wow, glad I found it and read it- great one shot!

“Dean…Oh God, Dean,” Sam cried, his voice broken, hoarse, and beautiful.

Beautiful. That simple word is what got me.

This is so well-written. I wish there was no limit. It would be amazing if you could have written more. But, all the same I'm pleased that nothing was scrunched into too small a proximity. Considering, I would say you have great reason to be proud of your work. Absolutely wonderful. I'm glad I found this.

Know what I'm doing now? Checking for more stories by you. Because you're so talented! Haha.


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Very good. I really enjoyed it!

Well you know how excited I was about this whole piece! So I just thought I'd mention a few other things that I really liked in it.
"Dean warily moved forward, as if he was approaching a wild animal. His hand was flexing with anticipation". I loved this line.
I loved section 8. Dean trying to get Sam to open up to him, just broke my heart. Especially the part where Dean is trying to get Sam to look at him.
Very nice story.

great job.. that was really good..

You know how I feel about Teen Winchester fic and I'm a sucker for delusional Sam...you have made me so very happy with this story.

5,0 words really isn't much space to work with and I think you did a fabulous job with your entry.

And did I mention that I really like Sam in a straight jacket?

Thanks for the great fic Chloe!

That was intense. Very well done. Thanks for not making it a multi-chapter fic and leaving me hanging about Sam's mental status. Yeah, there's room for a follow-up story, but we know the boys will work everything out : ) Well written, very tense...enjoyed it a lot!

Your writing, as usual, just blows me away. I love the way you show the three way relationship. The family dynamics just seem so real, and you can see how, eventually, John and Sam ended up at odds. Great job.

So if I sent you brownies and water ice and other goodies could you be cajoled into more 'through the night' writing sessions?

Wow amazing fic, loved reading it

this was amazing, i loved Dean's torment knowing Sam wasn't really all there and how Sam was trying to convince himself that Dean wasn't real almost like a defense mechanism. Great job and really well written, loved it!

Awesome oneshot tho I would have loved to known exactly what kind of demon it was that had kidnapped Sammy. Of course you had to stay within the limits so I understand not giving more details!

Awesome story. I felt so bad for Sam, but just as bad for Dean. I love brotherly angst, so it definitely fit the bill. Yes, there could have been more, but what was there was telling enough for it to end there as well. Great job!