My god, I really need to check my email more often!
I squealed when I saw your chapter was out, but when saw that lovely little letter in my inbox and realized the date, I felt awful! Sorry it has taken so long!

And where to start, where to start...
Haha, I love Kushina's taste. The spiciness and the pepers. Lol poor Minato, he doesnt even say anything about it...
and awwh! the beach scene! too cute...it made me so sad because I knew what was coming :( I loved the conversation between the siblings, it was so adorable and childish and just so good, almost heartbreaking.
Katsuya! WHY DIDNT YOU HUG HER SHE'S YOUR BABY SISTER D:
goodbye's in the night when someones half asleep are so sad and innocent :(

"He stroked her hair, so red, even in the darkness, behind her ear, and kissed her on the cheek. He could see his tears fall on her skin. “I am so, so sorry, Kushina…" OMG, god that was good sentence.
And we now know where the spiciness comes from! OMG GRAMMY :(
"It was August and it felt like December. Everything was falling apart." Another great line :)
And oh, oh the mercy and debts that happen here :( and kushina, the only survivor! SADD! :(
great job, keep up the work!

I really like this story so far. Lol the church of jashin funds abortions! Keep up the good work. But sidenote, and please don't take this as a flame cus I can assure you that its not.

I have had an abortion. And you should be a bit more sensitive. I'm not an emotional wreak or anything but it made me uncomfortable to read it. There are plenty of reasons women have abortions. I don't want children and am scared to give birth. That was mine. And I also knew if I gave birth to it, i'd want to keep it. So I got rid of it.

I think the idea was brilliant and that it was funny. But it also sort of demonized abortions and the women who get them as being desperate. And if another woman who had an abortion a lot later than I did (cus mine was just medical/pills) they would have been sadder then me.

Take care and keep up the good work!

I'm going to fail biology because of this story. Just thought you should know...
...Update soon? O:D

Afther a long time i finally stumbled with this fic again¡.
And i finally got to read up to date...im hopping for next chapert, the story is interesting.

As for criticism, the way you form Kushina's dialagos drives me crazy, sometimes i read it and am remeined of holliwood-movie-cheerleader... and sometimes of a punk... don't know.

the romanace has no logical sence... you barely put scenes of those two and if you put they usually fight, or Kushina is bickering, and sudenly...BAM.. love. Althoug... love is no logical to beging with.

as for Kushina's past, well most fics put her with a team and a lot of other refugies, but i have always pictured she as the only survivor. so i rather enjoyed chapter 21

update update update i LOVE this story and it drives me nuts not being able to know how it ends!

wow, great chapter!

Kushina has a disgusting personality.

Not because of what she did, but because of the way that she speaks.

It's disgusting.

Seriously disgusting.

Completely, totally, utterly, ridiculously, entirely, absolutely and wholly crude.

And disgusting.

that was nicely written...

it clearly shows the political corruption of the different ninja cities...

T.T

that was so nice...

COOKIE
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I love where this story is going and I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon! :)

I don't get why the mist ninja attacked a little village like this. But Kushina saved Haku's mother, right?

hm...i smell fluff and I love it! hahaha.

UPDATE SOON~!

Kushina's past is so depressing, but i love your description of the massacre and her relationship with her family. and this is quite random, and i already knew and realized this a long time ago, but minato is simply adorable. he is quite possibly the sweetest, most caring, and most selfless man out there, and your writing does nothing but prove it. i absolutely love this story

:)

~Ashi of Instrument Trio~

nice. very nice.
now back to minato
lol
good job keep up the writin

Ricchan...*blubber*
It's the sensitivity to light, I swear! I'm not tearing up, really! *sniff*

Nice backstory...but so sad ='(

I love your story btw!