I'm going to fail biology because of this story. Just thought you should know...
...Update soon? O:D

Afther a long time i finally stumbled with this fic again¡.
And i finally got to read up to date...im hopping for next chapert, the story is interesting.

As for criticism, the way you form Kushina's dialagos drives me crazy, sometimes i read it and am remeined of holliwood-movie-cheerleader... and sometimes of a punk... don't know.

the romanace has no logical sence... you barely put scenes of those two and if you put they usually fight, or Kushina is bickering, and sudenly...BAM.. love. Althoug... love is no logical to beging with.

as for Kushina's past, well most fics put her with a team and a lot of other refugies, but i have always pictured she as the only survivor. so i rather enjoyed chapter 21

update update update i LOVE this story and it drives me nuts not being able to know how it ends!

wow, great chapter!

Kushina has a disgusting personality.

Not because of what she did, but because of the way that she speaks.

It's disgusting.

Seriously disgusting.

Completely, totally, utterly, ridiculously, entirely, absolutely and wholly crude.

And disgusting.

that was nicely written...

it clearly shows the political corruption of the different ninja cities...

T.T

that was so nice...

COOKIE
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I love where this story is going and I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon! :)

I don't get why the mist ninja attacked a little village like this. But Kushina saved Haku's mother, right?

hm...i smell fluff and I love it! hahaha.

UPDATE SOON~!

Kushina's past is so depressing, but i love your description of the massacre and her relationship with her family. and this is quite random, and i already knew and realized this a long time ago, but minato is simply adorable. he is quite possibly the sweetest, most caring, and most selfless man out there, and your writing does nothing but prove it. i absolutely love this story

:)

~Ashi of Instrument Trio~

nice. very nice.
now back to minato
lol
good job keep up the writin

Ricchan...*blubber*
It's the sensitivity to light, I swear! I'm not tearing up, really! *sniff*

Nice backstory...but so sad ='(

I love your story btw!

very nice incorperation of the manga into your plot! I liked it

thank you