I'll get the begging out of the way first: UPDATE~! PLEASE?

I'm already intrigued--and anticipating the armour!Al sexing. XD (I'll admit, it's one of my kinks.) But this hasn't been updated in over a year and that's disheartening. ;.; Please update?

-yami

I'm really interested in where this story is going. I love Ed's and Al's relationship, and I like reading people's takes on Elricest when Al is in the armor. This is the only one that I've read that actually focuses on how they feel, though. Congratz and I look forward to more!

super sweet story!
i love the ending for the chapter!
CUTE!
UPDATE SOON!
XD

aw..that was really sweet XDXD

update soon kay?? 8D

Aww, cute and fluffy! =3
I've wanted to read something like that for so long--and it's NOT DONE!
You MUST update this. And SOON!!
I'll be waiting

*alerts*

You reviewed yourself O.o

Would you care to review me?

I've noticed that FMA fans don't really review that much (my story case in point- 30 views and ONE review) So here I am giving a review to you ^-^. I don't usually like Elricest the way others write it, but yours sound sweet, and It's well written. I saw the series when it was on tv, so I was a little stunbunnied when you used Roy's Japanese name and the Japanese terms. But fortunately I know most of them already from reading on this site for so long. Keep going with a smile on your face for your writing! Ja!

aw, cute...

I am reviewing myself! Why? Because no one else is. xO I've had pics with 22 views get 4 reviews, and this has NONE. T_T So here's a review. I think I did okay on this chapter, but could have done better. I should continue it.