Oh, I didn't know you wrote NYPD Blue fics! I LOVE that show! I was never a great fan of Kelly (I prefer Bobby by a mile) but you've written both he and Laura perfectly here, the show could've done so much more with them even though they were just in it for one season, the writers obviously liked Kelly/Janice Licalsi better.

Well done!

scifiromance

absolutely fantastic! I love it!