Reviews for The Broken Stallion

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Trugeta 2008-08-30 ch 18,	abuseI really liked this chapter. Well written and interesting to the end. I particularly liked the part where Nabiki explained how babies are made to Akane. Fun, that. Who knows, maybe the lesson will stick. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to more.
Bobboky 2008-08-21 ch 18,	abusegood
sandcrawlr 2008-08-21 ch 18,	abuseBrilliant story, just wanted to encourage you to keep it up. :)
Rose1948 2008-08-20 ch 18,	abusewow... Very VERY nice chapter!
Midoriryu 2008-08-20 ch 18,	abuseVery nice to see more of this. Is Happosai better, as bad, or worse than Genma? I can't really tell at this point. Kasumi, and Nabiki, boy have they got it bad. The tension is getting almost maddening. I imagine that Akane is going to have a VERY bad time for a while after this latest stunt. Not very observant is she?
James Axelrad 2008-08-18 ch 18,	abusegreat chapter. poor nabiki. i wonder if she is going to be tracking ranma whenever he is near her now.
Chris Stalis 2008-08-18 ch 18,	abuseThis has got to be one of the strangest romps through Nerima I've ever seen. And what you did with Tofu... that was just freaking eerie when I first read it. I don't think I'll ever be able to think of his fogged up glasses the same way again. My one complaint is that you don't seem to want to stick to the darkness that you started the story with. This began almost Lovecraft dark, like we would be able to see the depths of madness in the characters. But now... horrible things happen, sure, but they're glossed over. Tofu goes to do something unspeakable, and is then just a beaten pulp, justice being swiftly meted out. It's good writing, don't get me wrong. It just feels... disappointing. I love the story, and will be keeping a close eye on it, but I do hope to see some more spookiness in the dark bits you describe. I think those scenes are your finest moments.
Sargon Dorsai 2008-08-18 ch 18,	abuseAlways a pleasure to see another chapter of this delightful story. Ranma's interactions with everyone always bring a smile to my lips. I love watching the various relationships that are building with everyone and I'm looking forward to seeing more of what Hinako brings to the mix. And the little bits with Kasumi and her desire for Ranma... so much fun! When are we going to find out what really happened to Nabiki?
Dumbledork 2008-08-18 ch 18,	abuseBrilliant.
Wonderbee31 2008-08-17 ch 18,	abuseVery good spot here, and loved Kasumi's reactions to Nodoka and her grandchildren obsession, as well as Nabiki and her finally telling Akane off about her prevert obsession.
Quathis 2008-08-17 ch 18,	abuseInteresting theme this chapter. Wonder what would happen if Kasumi and Nabiki had a conversation about their "needs" regarding Ranma. Probably end in a catfight. Looks like Genma will be back soon to cause trouble, though Happosai is doing enough right now to make up for it.
FuzzyBoots 2008-08-17 ch 18,	abuse:) So, Nabiki's being a little more up front about her feelings for Ranma. That's a nice touch. It will be interesting to see just what damage she's unintentionally done to his fragile psyche. I can almost visualize a DaVinci Code-level self-flagellation. Not that I enjoy Ranma's suffering, but he's a fascinatingly complex character right now, and it's interesting seeing him as the vulnerable one and the girls being the ones who have to be careful how they handle him.
Rose1948 2008-08-16 ch 17,	abuse::chuckles:: I can't begin to say how much I like this story. Still wouldn't mind having Panda Delight, though. Or Panda Pineapple. ::thinks:: Sushi-type panda? Panda stew? Panda and Dumplings? Panda anything as long as the panda supplying the meat was Genma?
The Dred Samael 2008-07-29 ch 13,	abuseoh u sure as he[[ better not be making akane nice i swear if u r i am gunna find ya whereever u r 4 wasting my time reading this
The Dred Samael 2008-07-29 ch 12,	abusegod i wish someone would kill akane

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