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| Butta Usagi 2008-03-02 ch 4,  | abuseUpdate soon plz. |
| eliza-morgan22 2007-11-13 ch 4, | abusei really like your story and cant wait to see what you do with it next. |
| Serena530 2007-11-12 ch 4, | abuseIts my first time reading this through and I really like it so far. I really hope that you finish up your re-write and post really soon. =) |
| mz.demon-inuyasha 2007-11-11 ch 4, | abuseits good to me |
| DavisJes 2007-11-03 ch 4, | abuseI think combining and rewriting the chapters are a good idea. Do not get me wrong I like the story the chapters are just really really short. Please let me know when the new versio is up. |
| DavisJes 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseNicely written. Try making the chapters a little longer. |
| sousie 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseupdate soon |
| momocolady 2007-09-27 ch 3, | abuseI like it |
| DavisJes 2007-09-22 ch 2, | abusePlease write more. |
| DavisJes 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseNicely writen. On to chapter 2. |
| FireSenshi2 2007-09-20 ch 2, | abuseUpdate soon! I'm very much looking forward to your next chapter! |
| Pharynx 2007-09-20 ch 2, | abuseWhat a great start! I hope you continue this story about Crystal Tokyo. |
| sakurawolfblossom 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abusethis is pretty good. keep up the good work. and the word is ginzuishou |
| Edens-MoonlightAngel 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat start! I don't see many writers try and tackle how Serena saves the earth and creates Crystal Tokyo. I can't wait to see where you take this! -Kat- |