So sad it makes me want to cry.
Loved it going in my favs.

Forbidden love...yet the heart gets what it desires...
A classic plot told in a way that didn't seem cliche...
LOVED IT ;)

Beautiful. I love your writing. It helps that there was WP there, although it was angst more than anything else. I was so sad at the ending, with Phobos dead and Will's suicide. Real Romeo and Juliet...

I loved it. It's really good and descriptive. You are a great writer. Please write more Phobos/Will fanfiction. Favouriting

Wow...that was good, but so sad...

That is one of the most beautiful pieces of work I have ever read, it flowed nicely and I could feel the emotion in the words. Fantastic job keep writing ^_^
Ely0n

Such a nice [yet depressing] poem.

Awesome! Very well-written!

I likey. ^_^

(This would be the same ForeverACharmedOne from deviantART btw. :D )

-Forever

P.S. KEEP WRITING!

Well, written, though I can't say it is the most orthodox pairing I've ever seen, but a very interesting one

i love the poem you shouldl be a writer you would make millions for the stories and poems that you write

I really liked this one. It was sad but it also showed that love can change anyone.

oo like it a lot

That was so beautiful it nearly made me cry! Job well down!

Wow. Good stuff. This is what we'd call a tragedy in its innocence lost.

Knight

I enjoyed this greatly. Well done.