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| SaronCalamore 2008-04-18 ch 4,  | abuseSince the oneshot in Chronology, I've been wondering just how Aion got ahold of the legacy sample. I'm glad to see that that question has finally been answered. Joshua's reaction was great, but the line, "This is for family, which you are a part of." ... "A family which you were both a part of, despite everything." really got to me. Keep up the great work! |
| Riana1 2008-04-17 ch 4, | abuseI love the fact that Joshua was apart of bringing his niece into the world-- Aion can be such a complete bastard yet so sincere you can't doubt him. This is a wonderful piece. |
| PaCT 2008-04-15 ch 4, | abuseI want MORE added to this!...please? |
2008-04-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseI'm glad that you included how Aion secured the legacy sample for Chrono. I've wondered how he did it, and now we know! But what I enjoyed even more was how you portrayed Joshua in this chapter. It's perfect. |
| Dragoon-Yue 2008-02-20 ch 3, | abuseIs this going to be continued? I really like it and would like to know what happens next. |
| Cranberry Window 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseAnd,lo, Aion always regrets some of the more questionable things he did. And Shader having a spine is always good (and I'm so irritated by authors that portray her as some sort of drug dazed cat on catnip, or something along those lines). |
| SaronCalamore 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseI really enjoy these short stories that you have going on. They're just so different from what is usually seen, that I find them incredibly fascinating. You take a subject that most authors skip over (the Sinners after Pandemonium is gone) and you fill in the gaps. So, keep up the great work, and I hope that you write some more for ths particular series that you have going. |
| Riana1 2007-12-30 ch 3, | abuseYou make like Aion a little despite the blood and bodies under his hand. He stole away and murdered the lives of those two human children and misses them at breakfast, wondering what they would want to read with their milk. It is truly heart breaking. And Shader hissing at Aion at Fi: she respects his vision and will follow him into hell, but some part of her will never forgive him for the things he asked her to do. I love it. |
| Faii 2007-12-29 ch 3, | abuseI love it soso much... Really, I have no idea where you are taking this, and it makes me excited to read the next chapter!! |
| PaCT 2007-12-29 ch 3, | abuseIs he going to do something about it? UPDATE ASAP! |
| PaCT 2007-12-29 ch 2, | abuseWow. You're really, rally good. wow. |
| PaCT 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abusethat was sweet! I want more! |
| Riana1 2007-12-26 ch 2, | abuseAnd they live. I wish to see more of Fiore like less, damaged but not despairing, reaching forward instead of standing still. I love your Shader. |
| Faii 2007-12-26 ch 2, | abuseReally interesting story thus far! I can't wait to read more! |
| Riana1 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseEach scene is beautiful and decaying like autumn leaves, I can feel the aftermath of the series here. You write in all five senses. |