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Why do you make me laugh so hard?

-Apep (who says she really liked this)

Amazing imagery and characterization. Love Yami's playfulness and Bakura's frustration; love their dynamic. Brilliant little story.

i love the fact that there's no dialogue in this-you managed to capture darkshipping perfectly. i especially adore how yami managed to return from the afterlife. kudos!

Yay! I followed the link from LiveJournal- it's nekogirl_beth16 ; I'm a new member on that community, and I'd just like to say that I really like this story- you've done very well on not using any speech!

Smile _

Ireina

I love this story! It is extremely well written, and you didn't need dialog!

Cute, a bit confusing sometimes, but cute

Great story! Me like! :)

wow me love the story so far, its excatly how i think yami and bakura relationship would be like, if they got togerther

"practical heat conservation" Hee, thatr made me giggle earlier. And then i looked at the sheer word of 'naked' and went BOM! (I literally screamed 'BOOM' in the middle of free time in conputer class _ I was sent to the office for the second time...YAY) And then...(sizzle)

...HAPPY NOISES! Maybe 'screwing' noises...unless Baku was expirementing with 'tickling' (Yes, I AM gross after a big bowl of ice cream .

Hi Shadow,

Once again U amaze me with your wit and writting style. I hope you win. I loved this alot. I seldom read YB/YY stories.

This is very good and I liked the fact there was no talking just jestures and it was fun to imagine Bakura and Yami fighting over the puzzel section of the paper then it turned all kissy, kissy.

Well fighting and making up is just one of the things we do when we are in love with the person we are with.

I enjoyed this one shot alot and feel it deserves first prize. Let me know what happens here.

Bye for the now and again great one shot.

Better add this to favs too. This will be the first time I added a YB/YY story.

Darleneartist.

I really liked this story.. You really know how to write a good story...