thanks for sharing

Sigh. Even if this story doesn't get updated, thank you for leaving it on ff.net for people like us to read.

This is a very good, well written story. I love the flashbacks and I cannot wait to see how Allen and Tyki became Noah. And that illusion to Allen being stabbed by Millenie's sword? I really want to know what happened there. I can't wait till Noah Tyki comes into the story. I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

LOL ALLEN! W

I love Noah!Allen, just saying!

Update soon okay? :3

FORWARD!

The word is forward. Moving forward. A foreword is a piece of writing at the beginning of some books.

Fore-think "before"

Word- think "writing"

Forward-think "toward." It's a direction.

The word isn't foreward either.

Chapter 1:

1. Anywhere but there. He needed to move foreword.

2. He had to keep moving foreword, as Mana had taught him to.

Ch2:

1.It moved foreword, and stared at him.

2. The creature leaned foreword, resting its lips against his arm.

Ch 3:

1. Something was prickling at the back of his mind, trying to come foreword.

2. Tiki said gently, carefully stepping foreword, carefully, but deliberately.

3. "And, so… I kept walking, moving foreword, you know?

4. How do I 'keep moving foreword', if the past is dragging me back?

Ch 4:

1.The world passed him by so quickly- it was like watching time on fast-foreword.

2. He was starting a new life- Moving foreword, just as Mana wanted him to.

3.His grin widened, and he pushed foreword.

4.Lavi, who was actually making a bit of effort to stop laughing now, nudged him foreword.

5.Lavi blinked, and leaned foreword, towards the younger boy.

6. She pushed foreward, looking up into her older brother's dark eyes, they seemed unnaturally serious, almost cold.

7. "So," he started, leaning foreword to get a better look at him in the light.

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DEFINITELY

You see the letter "e" twice and you see the letter "i" twice. "Definitely" means that something is for sure going to happen. "Defiantly," the word you keep using instead, is more like the word "rebelliously." A person would defiantly challenge authority.

Ch 2:

1. "Frankly, I'm surprised the control has lasted for this long, but he's most defiantly growing stronger now, especially in my absence.

2. "He'll defiantly come. We were lucky, this time he was only able to send the letter…"

Ch 3:

1. He was defiantly familiar.

2. There was defiantly something odd about him, on the left side only, though.

3. It must have fixed itself quickly though, because it was defiantly able to have an attack a moment later, when the boy's hands suddenly went to his head, and he started screaming.

Ch 4:

1. Though Lavi had defiantly been rude, that did not excuse Allen for being so rude in return.

2. The candles had defiantly bee going a bit far)

3. That most defiantly did not come from Allen.

Brilliant!

OH MY GOSH, I'm just loving this story! I love cute Allen and Tyki! (to be honest I like those parts better than the current parts but what can I say, they're just so !)

If you're going to do yullen, are you going to do do other pairings as well in the sequel? just wondering '-_- - crack pairing lover

but you don't have to, this story is miraculous on its own! can't wait for the update u

Interesting and unique

MORE PLS D: I loved it

Awww, it hasn't been updated for a year ... still hoping though! It sounds great so far, really enjoyed the chapters about Allen's past, and can't wait until Rhode arrives in the present arc! Hope this isn't abandoned yet!

O-o A wonderful, wonderful story. I love the characterization, and I'm just hoping to all heaven that the Noah and Allen don't get into a fight b/c of the Earl. After all, family is forever! (Right? Right?)

little!Allen and Tyki are also very, very cute. I think that I want to give both versions of Allen a big hug for all his troubles though. There's just something about how you write him that's adorable...

I would pick out my favorite line, but then I'd just end up copy-pasting the entire story. ;D

This is a good story. :3 love how Allen is in this! Adorable. :3 please keep updating

Update. Seriously. Everyone that reads this wants you to update and it's been forever (not really but close enough)so please? I started this three days ago and got some really great ideas that might go in one of my stories (as well as a few from other peoples stories.) It's a really nicely written series that just begs to be continued. Please update it?

(the last half of this review sounded like a review for an actual book xD Ha ha...)

i like this story, please update. i want to know more about how allen became a noah.

so in the end allen and tyki were noahs?