this made me really really happy for some reason

good show

That was odd and awesome and I love it. The random thoughts about coffee makers and imaginary sex goddesses were very fun. But hey, at least Seto learned a lesson.

"lilac silk dressing gown"? Kaiba's actually Christopher Chant and this proves it.

Oh my God. That was one one-shot that could have gotten me to snort chocolate milk out of my nose. Anyways.

My favorite line you ask? It most definitely MUST be this one: "I'd marry you, if it were legal..." That is hilarious. You really did a good job with your humor. You realy pulled it off.

What I liked most was your inclusion of Seto's "morning thoughts" because we all know how nutty Seto can get without his morning coffee.

Adding in Mokuba annoying Roland was a great touch--it brings the other characters into the spotlight, if only for a moment, but it shows that you as a writer have not forgotten them. Good job!

Ha! I can just imagine Campion carrying off those rabid fangirls. AGAIN, and I'm sure you must tire of this, good job with including Seto's thoughts--which were UBER hilarious (especially the one about invoking that sex goddess. That was kind of hot ^_^).

I also loved how you portrayed Seto's indecision as he is about to drink the chocolate milk. He berates himself for slobbering, which I found amusing, and then spills milk all over himself--and SOMEONE CATCHES HIM!

The end was perfect. "Shit." Yep, that's exactly what Seto's going to be in.

Thank you for this one shot. It really brightened up MY day. ~^_^~

That was hilarious! Poor Seto. Paranoia and arrogance is not a good combination. Great job.

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I love your style of writing. The discrption was wonderfully amusing, and the last minute loss of control really worked for me. A wonderful peice of litature :3

Hahahaha (chokes on air) hahahaha, cough, cough, hahahaha!!
That was simply brilliant! How did you come up with that?
Love the fic!
Huggles and kisses

Very cute and funny! I'd love a picture of Seto drinking chocolate milk from his cereal bowl! ^^ But this should have been rated much higher for langauge. You should change it to "T" to be more appropriate. - Amaya

Very well written, I just loved the line ‘I’d marry you, if it were legal, sweet coffee maker…’ I had to stop myself from laughing out loud. I like how he looks around for the paparatzi and still gets a photo take.