Another top class chapter here, Erico.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES TERRANY/ROURKE!

*cough*

Anyway, another great chapter. I'm very glad you updated, and hope you update again soon.

So, where to start...? I guess with the grammar and spelling, though we already know it's GORGEOUS. You switch your limited third person perfectly and seamlessly, and I absolutely love Falco again. x3

I always found Slippy pretty annoying, but now he's just EPIC.

You've gotta kinda feel bad for the Primals when you realize people's friends who are probably more like FAMILY are getting shot down, and the heroes laugh about it. They kill easily, but get killed pretty easily too. Then again, they've taken over the entire game-world we know and love and are openly trying to kill them, and you lose some sympathy.

Thank goodness that probe got shot down. My god, that would be just horrible. I mean, really. All that data right in the palm of their hands when we now know they're going to make an attack of their own? Thank goodness.

Awwww yeah, solo mission time (let the competition COMMENCE)!

Hound really shone here. Not bad for a Model K pilot, especially since he took down two and got help for the third.

Wallaby is just ADORABLE, and Damer's kinda like a less cocky Falco. I like.

YAY DANA. SHE AIN'T SUICIDAL NO MOAR. I loved her reaction with the mink, it was just so heartwarming. :)

Yay Milo! I love his bits. So precise and collected, it's a nice change from the usual cocky/rage-fueled/pride-driven POV's we usually get. But that last comment... Ergh, he's COMPLETELY RIGHT. D:

And we all know Starfox won. It's just so obvious. ):3

I hate Telemos but love him at the same time. He's getting some nice character development, but HE'S GONNA (try) TO KILL THEM!

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY ROURKE/TERRANY! I was smiling SO WIDELY the entire time! Just, eeee!

I hope Rourke doesn't die. *worry* :(c

OHMYGODHEISISN'THE.

Fanaticofmanythings

I just clicked onto the Star Fox category and immediately my eyes caught the unique plot for your story and already I'm liking it.

Keep up the good work!

Ok...I'm officially suffering withdrawals from this story.

I've tried a bunch of times to write a review that didn't sound like a teenage girl gushing over a Backstreet Boy, but could never quite manage it so I simply read through 20 chapters in silence.

But now so long with no update! Please don't make me beg! I'll start spouting phrases like "best StarFox fic of all time" and "dear God why does this only have 50-something reviews?" and "this fic plausibly institutes the upgrade and weapons 'draw' effect...are you kidding me?"

I've laughed out loud; I've cried; I've read breathless over some of the most fantastic battle scenes I've ever read; holy cow the characters actually develop and most amazingly of ALL - you've turned me into a Slippy fan! ME - who targeted that litte bugger every chance I got!

PLEASE...please update.

I'm begging.

Hi! I just recently found this, and I have to say I love it. My favorite part must be the fact that you have fleshed out the mechanics behind the terms that every Starfox fan knows in extraordinary detail. You seem to know these ships and this world as if you have engineered them yourself.

Trust me when I say this, a lot of authors can't come anywhere near to the level of understanding you have of the Starfox world, or at least the one you fleshed out

Your writing itself is spectacular as well. You stick with limited third person very well, and I NEVER find any spelling or grammar errors. Your plot is better than I expected and expect to find in the Starfox section, and you've nailed the characters you use, both cannon or original.

I must say, I like this chapter. More RourkexTerrany, Terrany did EXACTLY what I hoped she'd do, we got some Milo backstory, and we figure out that all of the Primal/human's best pilots are all training to be the ultimate Arwing-killers.

And the thing is, I can believe Terrany survived her four hour training because the techies are having a blast watching their comedy movie. Completely good news in a mess of bad and somewhat good at last. :)

Whelp, I hope you update soon! You have just gained a new reader. -

Fanaticofmanythings

i think terrany can succeed because she is part cerinian as well...think about it...krystal is able to handle the stress of her brain from overloading due to hearing too many thoughts at once.

it seems they all forgot entirely...and i think falco also forgot about it...lol. the only one who might remember is slippy but i think he also may not be able to remember as well.

good chapter man...and what terrany says is true...it will take some time for your brain or your entire body system to get use to it. practice makes perfect...the sentence which is part of this chapter..._.

good show as usual, somehow I think the rest of the Army is more upset about the Wildfox than those actually on the ship are...

Crap. That chaper was looooooooooong. Pretty crazy stuff goin on there! Glad to get an update, I know many people who have been constantly asking me if you had updated. I just tell them they need to make a frigging FF account! People really do need to review. Ah well. AMAZINGLY AMAZING update we have here! Can't wait for more!

Awesome fiction as usual.

I have no comments, just keep it up

:O Cliffhanger!

Haha, another great chapter. Plenty o' tasty action and all of that!

Theres one thing I have been wondering though... Terrany is said to be younger than Wallaby. I always thought it to be the other way around. : /. But, its your story, so... whatever. It would be cool to get a list of everyones ages or something!

Anyway... Keep it up!

The lack of reviews for this fantastic story is a sin. This is Easily among the best written and most intriguing stories I have ever read. As I said in my previous review, this story is professionally written. I have already recommended you story on the Shadows of Lylat forum, and hopefully once the engine is far enough along that user campaigns are enabled, I will be able to make this story into a full campaign. (or it might be easier to convince the team to use your story for the planned single player portion) :D

The only words I can use to adequately describe this piece of writing is that they should give out literary awards for it.

Callsign Viper, eh? You dog you :D

I like how packed tight all of this action is. It really hit home to me how much has happened over the course of the story when the chapter opened up with '7th day'. Gawd.

Really interesting angle with the Merge Mode issues. In general really liking how the Arwing has been built up to be this near-mythical space fighter, while at the same time you've been providing us a technological ground to base it all from. It must be absolutely terrifying to see Arwings coming at you in this universe, much less Seraphs, and you've done well in presenting that too.

I'm still puling for a more or less 'better' end for Telemos and his crew. We can't all be winners, but we can be survivors, I suppose.

Excellent update. Quite a thing to wake up to!

i had a guess/theory about what happen to terrany.

she will have a mental problem...as in both falco and her will be merge but in the same body but with 2 minds...lol.

i wonder if that is what you had in mind.

great chapter man.