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| Tallen S. 2008-09-21 ch 8,  | abusehow could you stop at such a cliff hanger I want YOU to update |
| lancelot.knight 2008-09-09 ch 9, | abusewell i love this story but maybe you could get naruto to change his mind about leaving and maybe deal with the curse mark on his own by burning it off with some of his other chakra (just an idea) cos i don't like the idea of naruto with 2 seals its just not right. remeber as the creator of this stroy you have cart blanche to do whatever the hell you like. i love the dojutsu and would love to see a naru harem after all the blond guy needs some lovin. please do continue if only for us fans of this fic thanks |
| x.Jamie-Chan.x 2008-09-04 ch 9, | abuseOhmaiGod. D: I JUST GOT REALLY PUMPED INTO IT! And i was all like Yeah wo i don't have to suffer the cliff hanger because theres another chapter! Thinking about all those suckers that would of had to wait if hey started reading this when you started BUT OMG. You discontinued D: sd kjghdajkgh dgfkdfgb. |
| vash3055 2008-07-30 ch 1, | abuseok |
| Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitt... 2008-07-30 ch 9, | abuseI loved this SO much! I waited long time to get you update... *bawling*...*suicide* |
| diimmortal 2008-07-30 ch 9, | abuseaww can you please not just try to rewrite it, or dont delete it otherwise people might not have the chance to rewrite it |
| Johnny-on-the-spot 2008-06-26 ch 8, | abuseNO! Please give me more... I beg you to update soon. |
| Blade of Sparda 2008-05-30 ch 8, | abusedamn i mean this is good and also please tell me were you got the naruto picture on your profile please tell me |
| MuonMax 2008-04-15 ch 8, | abusegreat story, i love your idea |
| colin 2008-04-06 ch 8, anon. | abusePlease for the love of fanfiction update soon. |
| swordbunny4486 2008-03-21 ch 8, | abuseoh noes, i sense trouble! |
| colin 2008-03-20 ch 8, anon. | abuseOkay that was a good cliffhanger. But seriously chapter 7&8 should have be 1 chapter that would have been a lot better than makeing 2 short individually crummy chapters to make 1 good chapter. I really like the story and am interested in were it is headed so please for the love of RAMEN UPDATE THE GODDAMMIT STORY I cant hardly stand the wait anymore. I has been 19 days and I want a new chapter SOON like now soon and a nice long one as well. Please update the wait is killing me. |
| colin 2008-03-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseAnother short chapter WTF? this was like a crappy filler. You should have combined this and the next chapter to make one normal chapter. But still progress is progress. You must update Yoda commands it! |
| colin 2008-03-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseOkay that figh was awesome "I hate the cold." The way it was said made it really creepy. that was cool. Also the descripiton of Naruto's new eyes was badass. I wish I had eyes like that. Even if they were just regular eyes but looked like that it would be awesome. Still you must MUST UPDATE! |
| colin 2008-03-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseSorry I read the authors note at the top of the chapter and realized that it answered most of what I was wondering about the black chakra. Still you need to update SOON! |