WONDERFULL STORY! 5 stars *

i like it so far. but the whole ron being drunk/beating her thing was like. outta nowhere. maybe if you explained before hand thats why they broke up or somehow lead into it a little bit. idk it just seemed sudden! but i like it so far.

I'm sorry, but this story has all the elements of the ultimate crap fanfiction. All you're missing is horrendous spelling errors.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

The only reason I read to this chapter was to see what she'd do about him. I don't buy that Hermione wouldn't do anything about Severus raping her, because that's what he did, no matter his reasons. I won't be reading another chapter, that's for sure.


HermioneSparta

love it

i think the story is good, but i don't think hermione would have reacted that way to the new amendment.

Love it...Cant wait till the sequel

Your story was great, cute and well written. Only two things are bothering me a little. I think that the story was progressing really too fast, you could have put much more stuff in it! Also, i think that three babies (almost) easily conceived for a woman who was not supposed to habe any, it's a lot. But there again, you are the writer, you decide. But I think that it would have been more realistic if she had been able to give birth to only one child, a little miracle. However, great job, bravo!

Thanks for a great story!

if you still need a beta i'd be more than happy to do it for you. if you're interested, email me at i really love your stories!

awe. twas cute!

Amy

i love cissy, i really do

why does it seem like snape was acting like the dunderheads he hates in his little tirade...?

Amy

THIS IS HAPPING TO FAST SLOW DOWN !
your in a rush take time
think it through