 Mad Maudlin Hart 2009-02-10 . chapter 1 Whoa.
My first thought while reading this fic was to leap up, shriek "PERVERT!" and hug the computer. This was, however, not feasible, as I am in the school library. So I settled for writing a review saying "I love this pairing, you're a good author. Be careful to proofread and stuff." |
 auri mynonys 2007-09-13 . chapter 1SEXAY!
Man, I've been missing my Grima/Eowyn smut...
*splashes cold water on face* Ahem. Anyway...
I like this. There's a couple awkward sentences and some grammatical errors, I think, but I like the concept of it.
I admit to being slightly disturbed by Grima's touching her when she isn't really willing (and inner wanting is not an excuse), but Grima is by far and away not the best of men and I could see him doing it.
Good story; I'll get working on Eowyn's POV ASAP. |