Lol poor Bella...I could picture her like that all night. It would be hilarious if Charlie reacted that calmly in the next book. Nice work!

There are a lot of stories out there like this, but this one is definitely the best. :)

HAHAHA fun >.

hah.
nice.
=)

That was a wonderful piece, and actually written in the style of Stephanie Meyer! And no your piece does not suck... plenty of others on here do, thanks for sharing the piece.

-Daine

THat was cute.