Reviews for Star Gate the Keys to Earth

Snowdove30 2008-07-11 ch 31,	abuseThis is really good. Thanks for posting.
Nomadic1 2008-06-08 ch 28,	abuseA little short? Which leads me to wonder what you have hidden up your sleeve. NTP
Nomadic1 2008-04-20 ch 24,	abuseFar too short, I'm wondering what you will do next. A quibble or two: The phrase is: "too trusting" not "to trusting." Also, unless I have missed something the correct spelling is Asgard not Azguard. Keep writing, NTP
Larsnitro 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abusePlease,please please KILL KINSEY. He is such a snake. Good story, can't wait for more!
Nomadic1 2008-03-06 ch 23,	abuseInteresting. Events are happening quickly. I sped through the story so may be wrong but there seem some odd plot holes along the way. Example: When did Adama' develop telekinetic powers? (back in chapter 1) Your spelling and grammar are getting better. Keep writing.
kahless21 2008-02-11 ch 20,	abuseWow if they killed kinnsey they'd probably get the medal of freedom. Keep up the good work.
trekie12cataz 2007-12-15 ch 15,	abuseok story but chaptors or to short and updates to few
Nomadic1 2007-10-17 ch 1,	abuseA story with potential. Unfortunately the spelling, incorrect word use and stilted conversation make it painful to read. Keep working at it. Make every word fight for it's place on the page. Get a good beta reader. Good luck and keep writing.