Interesting plot. You certainly wrote well with a clear and concise style and I look forward to reading more.

WOW. very interesting... like all your other stories, very well-written.

Brill! Update soon!

I enjoyed this story. I would love to know more about Breaker and the fate of Heero. Original stories like a these are gems. Hope to get more from you soon ^_^

Cute! Love the story so far. I'm itching to know about the whole Heero mystery! Great job, keep it up. =] Update soon!! ^^

I just love this story. To see Duo warming up to Breaker, and Breaker warming up to Duo gives me the warm, squishy fuzzies. I'd still love to know more about the mysterious child, and also what happened so long ago between Heero and Duo, and if Heero is indeed alive. Duo's finally reaching out to his past (even if he isn't aware of it), and I'd love to see just where it all goes.

Please continue soon?

Heya, nice story! I almost didn't look at it (the whole Heero being dead thing). I really liked the other fic of yours that I've read, though, so I figured I'd give it a shot. And I really like it! Sometimes the scene breaks are a bit fuzzy, but I like the characterizations, and the mystery you've built up surrounding Heero's disappearance. Is that who Hilde was talking to on the phone that one time? I don't know- it's really interesting, though. I hope you keep it up :)

feels good to find a good gw fic. somehow they get really rare. i can't wait for another chapter.

I just want to say that this is an excellent story, you're a good author! You put nice, specific details and analogies into your writing, making it easy to 'see' what is going on in the story. I'm glad that Duo hasn't gotten over his fear of Breaker and I can't wait to find out more about this kids' past! Nice job and update soon!

This is great! Duo is bonding with Breaker, I'm so happy! This a absolutely great. I like your story so far but I want to know how it continues soon~. Good luck with writing.

Breaker... I like it. The name gives Heero justice, so I'm sure his son will do well.

...Who is Hilde with? I wonder. Duo, face this poor child! Talk to him! He knows the answers you're looking for.

Duo, look him up! Go find him! Who is the boy's mother? What in the world, go Duo go!

Take care of the child, Duo. Do what you need to do, and be happy with that.

I have a hunch as to the child's name. This is sad, I truly hope Heero is still alive. Is that even possible to hope for? Sure, if he's passed, then I want Duo to find peace, but I don't want him to be dead. Also, I want to know why Duo didn't keep in touch with Heero? I really liked your description of Relena, and justification for Heero caring about her so much.