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| orangestarfoxes 2008-02-25 ch 3, | abuseAH! that was the greatest chappie of all!! i really thank u for putting my username on the page! when i saw it i completely freaked out with joy!^_^ so if u need any tipas or encouragement...COME TO ME!XD! |
| Shotokan 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abuseWow this is a good story! I've always liked the Kunglao and Jade pairing myself:P Quite interested in how they meet:P |
| orangestarfoxes 2008-01-08 ch 1, | abusewow! this is so awesome it made me cry!wheres the next story seqal to this? |
| Flame-Zero 117 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseman i rally like the whole pairing of kung lao and jade. Like kitana and liu kang falling in love with each other and baraka falling in love with mileena and now:kung lao with jade. I like the story a lot.Plz Update Soon. |
| DWMizu 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseOkay, now this is what I'm talking about. This is a very interesting, very entertaining story! My only advice is to work on descriptions a little bit more (less is more, have you ever heard of a saying like that?) I only say that because most people who read MK fanfiction will more than likely already be familiar with the characters. Anyway, this is tons better. Keep up the good work. |
| orangestarfoxes 2007-09-30 ch 2, | abuseomg!so good! MAKE MORE CHAPPIES! |
| Artistic Silence 2007-09-19 ch 2, | abuseAw... Cute... Hehe... You don't see much pairings involving Jade around here. I like the idea of a Jade/Kung Lao pairing... ^^; Keep it up! ^.^ |
| JCFighter 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Its great. Please kontinue. lol |
| Riddlebox Baby 2007-09-12 ch 1, | abuseWow. Kung Lao and Jade. Very nice coupling, and a very excellent story. I'd say for an aspiring young writer, you're doing great! Keep it up! |