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Wander52
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseThis story ran the gamut of emotions...and we got a rare glimpse into Grissom & Sara's hearts.
The Smoose
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was seriously cool. Really smart how you did it. Bravo!
MYBIGBLUEBOX
2008-01-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseHi there. Great piece, please write again soon, so I can have something else to add to the C2 to go with this one!
ajechi
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abusethat was great! ^_^

I like it...
laenamoradadeROGUE
2007-09-20
ch 1,
abusesimplemente maravillosa. the twist at the end was completely unexpected, though there had been some hints that i misjudged as typos :D lovely work!
Maria Sophania
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was absolutely beautiful. Well done.
Aimee5
2007-09-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful.
bellamarcella
2007-09-14
ch 1,
abuseI luvd it!! great job, very sweet, I thought she would have been just a dream to him after she died but you played it well the way you wrote it. NICE!
lamcsi
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseWhat a great twist at the end. You've been saving up for a whole year and look at what a great story you produced. Please don't wait another year to write your next story because I can't wait to read it.
bbandgsr
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was beautiful i loved it!
MajandraNova
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseOMG, I was so not expecting this ending! Nice story.
CSI4CoolBeans
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I LOVED THE ENDING!
anneruhland
2007-09-13
ch 1,
abuseThis was great. anne
YIsTheRumAlwaysGone
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseI loved it. Especially the twist at the end, it was excellent.
StarlaMarie
2007-09-12
ch 1,
abuseOh! I can't believe how sad I suddenly became at the end to find Sara was not with him yet, physically anyway. But at the same time I was thrilled because it was so very sweet.
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