wery, wery, wery good.

totaly in charecter.
:)

You know what!?

I love everything about this story.

Every. Single. Thing.

...It's just awesome, no doubt about it.

Well written, amusing and so delightfully in-character that I feel quite giddy!

I particularly love how the awkwardness is still present between Squall and Rinoa, yet they are clearly moving forward in their relationship; slowly but steadily. Many other authors seem to forget that these characters are only 17... But you've done a brilliant job with this little ficlet and you've really done the characters justice (in my humble opinion). Well done!

My favourite quote: “I hope you’re not expecting me to say no…” He felt his cheeks getting warm and moved closer to her lips again. “Yes, I would like to kiss you some more.”

...Brilliance! Sheer Brilliance!

So cute! Loved it!!

Great epilogue to the series, very heart-warming indeed. Really enjoyed reading this!

"Take off your shirt."
xD
Now THERE'S a way to immediately draw in readers!
This story was very good and, well, cute. I respect the fact that you didn't go too far with these two considering it barely takes place right after the balcony scene from the end of the game, yet I also respect that there was plenty of kissing involved.
I loved Lost and Found too btw, and where the hell did you get that tattoo!?

Great fanfic ;)

this is SO cute!
.. and funny XD i loved it.

aw too cute!

wow...this was a great story.
i love how you kept them in character even w/ all of the intamacy going on.
this was hot ;P
hehe.
anyways. this was really great writing :D

"Take off your shirt" Whoa! What a way to start out this sexy one shot, haha. I loved every second of it, especially how natural and human you've portrayed these two here. Especially Rinoa's swear, lol, that was hilarious. It was very cute and sexy, and also fits well with the game's ending--some things you mentioned, I hadn't even thought about, like the part where Squall's walking, and then he turns around and it looks like he's made no progress, wth!! lol. I really liked the feather metioning, and how Squall continues to investigate her "wounds" even without bringing up after that--he has SO many secrets too, so natural and human. I love this story so much. You always have written wonderfully, identifying body parts masterfully (omg, I think all I can name from the top of my head of the human back is probably the shoulder blades and spine...pretty pathetic, I know, lol...usually the word "back" covers all of that, lol!) But anyway, enough of my sillyness, I loved it and will be keeping this for my own personal stash! Happy New Year!! Leave all the bad in 2007, we're bringing in 08 Wo! (lol...yeah, you remember how goofy I am, right?! lol, I'm not crazy!)

cool fic, you got Riona and Squal totally incharacter

Aw this is cute. Really cute. I'm glad I found it. Merry Christmas!

Oh Carrie, you know I could say a thousand things about your writing. In fact, you still remain the very person I reviewed and acted like a total fan girl. Yes, I'm embarrassed by that, but I guess it just show how far we've both come... or maybe it shows how much we both have to go, not sure. ;)

Anyway, the story is remarkable. Just as good as the original copy you sent me all those months ago or at least the beginning. It's the perfect amount of tension, romance, logic, and entertainment. Your writing always captivates me. You have the natural ability to stay true to character and still tell a beautiful story. I can feel the situations along with the 'teenage awkwardness' these two are facing. I still cannot believe you still hand write all your work, that alone in the era of computers is an art form that deserves recognition.

I seriously hope you do write another story, and hope that Final Fantasy Eight still has a part in your life for a long time. Thanks for being there for the last six years. Your writing was a huge inspiration, one of two stories that made me attempt to write my own. You'll never know how special Lost and Found was to me.

What is even better than your writing is the friendship that we have established over the last years. I want to go back to Wisconsin soon, if for no other reason than to hang out with you in a mall again! ;) You’re an awesome writer and an ever better friend.

Thanks for everything.
Kris.

Simply a wonderful, awesome, sweet piece of work and I loved the last line. And tines! Now there's a word I would never thought of using ever so you got me back one. I hope you will keep writing when the spirit moves you because I have always enjoyed your work so much. I thought I was completely written out two or three years ago and then all of the sudden, I started writing again - so I guess we never know for certain. Again - kudos. Btw, I could go on and agree with everything that everyone has said and mean it completely, but I won't, because I'm lazy, plus they already have said it better than I could. Your friend, Bob

now that was deep...i raise my wings to you! (Raises wings and bows as an applause) Well done! Optical Goddess Well done!

i thought it was sweet :> very sweet. i liked the idea of rinoa's limit break giving her the 'afterglow' on her back. pretty inventive, i think. i do think it odd that rinoa wouldn't have at least asked about what had happened to her when she was comatose. imagine falling asleep at the end of a major fight to wake up dying is space. would leave me thinking.

anywho, that wasn't a negative comment on your little story! i really did like it!

oh, and cool tattoo by the by.